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3/27/2012 c1 nicole7579
I loved this! The tension with Caden completely drove the story and it was very subtle. Can't wait to read more. See you in your other stories (which I read constantly)!
3/27/2012 c1 9TheChay531
I loved this! You really captured the whole transition and as the reader I didn't feel rushed. I will definitely be rereading this in the future. :D
3/27/2012 c1 3peacelovejay
SO GOOD! :D Loved every bit of it. A great twist on a cliche.
3/27/2012 c1 2sunshinernnr
love love love it!

I think this story flowed effortlessly (from a reading perspective). The characters were well depicted via dialogue/description/action. Character and romantic developments were very natural. The pacing of the story felt good and there were no unnecessary explanation or description.

Awesome job!
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