for The Sailor's General Superior6/15/2012 c19 tamzingrace
Enjoying the story. Poor Cale, hope he feels better soon. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Enjoying the story. Poor Cale, hope he feels better soon. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
6/15/2012 c19 
2NormaJean Beausoleil
ooOOOoo! an update on tuesday? woot!
such a fun story. i was utterly pleased to see a friday update after a thursday one. thanks you for not leaving us hanging from tenterhooks (tender hooks?) for more than 24 hours.
*tosses you croissants for writing stamina* keep up the good work!
2NormaJean BeausoleilooOOOoo! an update on tuesday? woot!
such a fun story. i was utterly pleased to see a friday update after a thursday one. thanks you for not leaving us hanging from tenterhooks (tender hooks?) for more than 24 hours.
*tosses you croissants for writing stamina* keep up the good work!
6/14/2012 c18 NormaJean Beausoleil
ugh! cliffhanger ?
great job. i'm surprised that you got calentine beat up so badly. good twist.
thanks for sharing. it's wonderful, as always.
ugh! cliffhanger ?
great job. i'm surprised that you got calentine beat up so badly. good twist.
thanks for sharing. it's wonderful, as always.
6/14/2012 c18 Mieu-san
I'm looking forward to Friday, or the weekend, or any point in the future where you are still writing, immensely. I love this story and am sort of lacking the words on how to express this. Somehow capitals and exclamation points feel tacky. Suffice to say that you astound me and if ever there was a story that made me glad for its telling, this certainly is just so.
Fortune to you!
I'm looking forward to Friday, or the weekend, or any point in the future where you are still writing, immensely. I love this story and am sort of lacking the words on how to express this. Somehow capitals and exclamation points feel tacky. Suffice to say that you astound me and if ever there was a story that made me glad for its telling, this certainly is just so.
Fortune to you!
6/13/2012 c18 PlusEncore
Holy crap! this is oh so fantastic. I have always love original fiction and this just about takes the cake!
Holy crap! this is oh so fantastic. I have always love original fiction and this just about takes the cake!
6/12/2012 c18 Chibikodo
Oh no! What have you gotten into Calentine? How bad is the damage. :o will Asotegi even listen to Calentine and stop crying?
Cliff hangers are horrible!
Oh no! What have you gotten into Calentine? How bad is the damage. :o will Asotegi even listen to Calentine and stop crying?
Cliff hangers are horrible!
6/12/2012 c18 Rhapsodybywam
You are awesome. No other author I'm reading updates as consistently and as well as you do. Every Tuesday and Friday I check my e-mail to find a little surprise waiting for me telling me it's time to continue reading and it's just great. I don't know how you maintain a job and do this but please keep doing what you're doing! I really enjoy how you're inching Calentine along, personally I know I wouldn't have had the patience, it really shows a mastery of the overarching story that you're trying to tell us. Thank you so much for writing so well and so often and I look forward to continue reading your work :)
You are awesome. No other author I'm reading updates as consistently and as well as you do. Every Tuesday and Friday I check my e-mail to find a little surprise waiting for me telling me it's time to continue reading and it's just great. I don't know how you maintain a job and do this but please keep doing what you're doing! I really enjoy how you're inching Calentine along, personally I know I wouldn't have had the patience, it really shows a mastery of the overarching story that you're trying to tell us. Thank you so much for writing so well and so often and I look forward to continue reading your work :)
6/12/2012 c18 1Sundavar
Oh no, what is going to happen next? I'm so worried about Calentine and the general!
Thanks for updating, you are an amazing author, keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
1SundavarOh no, what is going to happen next? I'm so worried about Calentine and the general!
Thanks for updating, you are an amazing author, keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
6/12/2012 c18 tmelange1
Dramatic continuation! I was on the edge of my seat! I wanted to smack Calentine for letting himself be beaten practically to death. I wish this chapter were longer. I want to know what happens next. lol Bravo!
Dramatic continuation! I was on the edge of my seat! I wanted to smack Calentine for letting himself be beaten practically to death. I wish this chapter were longer. I want to know what happens next. lol Bravo!
6/10/2012 c17 Specificity
Augh. You have such a creative mind. I'm jealous of it, haha. I love your plots; they're always interesting.
I particularly enjoy where you've taken this story, even though it's the complete opposite of where I thought it would be some several chapters ago.
There are several dynamics in this story that stand out as amazingly creative, especially the way in which they do battle. It seems as though you've taken a jousting component and then made it... not. That's really creative. I'm also impressed with your ability to write in a style that's both past and present. I keep reading sentences wrongly and then having to go back to see if the meaning is the same my way as well as yours, haha. It's really awesome to have that fusion because it makes a very split, unique parallel to what's typically the normal when it comes to modern day writing. I'm always enamoured with stories like this where that dynamic has been reached.
Thanks for the read,
- A.
Augh. You have such a creative mind. I'm jealous of it, haha. I love your plots; they're always interesting.
I particularly enjoy where you've taken this story, even though it's the complete opposite of where I thought it would be some several chapters ago.
There are several dynamics in this story that stand out as amazingly creative, especially the way in which they do battle. It seems as though you've taken a jousting component and then made it... not. That's really creative. I'm also impressed with your ability to write in a style that's both past and present. I keep reading sentences wrongly and then having to go back to see if the meaning is the same my way as well as yours, haha. It's really awesome to have that fusion because it makes a very split, unique parallel to what's typically the normal when it comes to modern day writing. I'm always enamoured with stories like this where that dynamic has been reached.
Thanks for the read,
- A.
6/9/2012 c17 Guest
I'll give Calentine a little while longer to figure out his feelings before I get the urge to smack him upside the back of his head for being clueless. Wobder what Asotegi was really doing outside... Did he meet with Alim or go out to think? Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'll give Calentine a little while longer to figure out his feelings before I get the urge to smack him upside the back of his head for being clueless. Wobder what Asotegi was really doing outside... Did he meet with Alim or go out to think? Looking forward to the next chapter.
6/9/2012 c17 Dana Jameson
I liked this chapter. Well not the part when Asotegi was in the woods with Alim, though that did help with the story and explain more of Asotegi's feelings and help with Cale's jealousy!, which is always a good thing! And I liked that Cale is starting to explore his feelings. Hopefully this means good things for them! All in all good chapter.
I liked this chapter. Well not the part when Asotegi was in the woods with Alim, though that did help with the story and explain more of Asotegi's feelings and help with Cale's jealousy!, which is always a good thing! And I liked that Cale is starting to explore his feelings. Hopefully this means good things for them! All in all good chapter.
6/8/2012 c17 3958oo
you are the best :)
you are the best :)
6/8/2012 c17 tmelange1
This was a great chapter. I enjoyed the relationship progression, and Calentine's changing feelings. I think you should give us an extra chapter today, since we didn't get an update Tuesday. :)) Bravo!
This was a great chapter. I enjoyed the relationship progression, and Calentine's changing feelings. I think you should give us an extra chapter today, since we didn't get an update Tuesday. :)) Bravo!