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4/20/2012 c6 Chibikodo
I guess I understand why they're fighting in such an absurd manner now. I suppose it'd be bad to kill extended family when it's really just a squabble that got reaaally out o hand.

Looking forward to the next chapter
4/18/2012 c5 Chibikodo
haha I have to agree with Cal- that's the worst battle (if it can be called that) that I've ever witnessed. It was rather reminiscent of those old-fashioned first blood duels. I get that they don't want people to die, but it's rather ludicrous to fight like that...

More please~!
4/17/2012 c5 OyO
asotegi is so cute, poor thing. i want lovey dovey times for him already ;n; it must be so hard for him to have a focus that has no idea whats going on! and what exactly is the general's relationship to alim anyway? GAH. waiting for ur update!
4/17/2012 c5 Ranilyn
YES! AN UPDATE! Made my day...I really like this fic and I can't what to read more! What? You mean to tell me you have more marvelous words hidden in your sleeves? Eagerly waiting for Friday! I like the world you've created, and the Dzali are quite interesting. You've got me really curious though...what exactly is a focus, and what's our friend here going to do? I'm just as confused and intrigued as Cale to find out what's going on. XD
4/17/2012 c5 17Mieu-san
Annnnnd... defeat! Never quite am expecting that! And I CERTAINLY wasn't expecting the way these battles were fought. That was really interesting and I wonder how it will affect the rest of the story...

Another exceptionally interesting chapter! Can't wait to read more and thank you for writing.
4/17/2012 c5 Arillian
I'm still loving this story :3
4/17/2012 c5 tmelange1
Outstanding chapter! It really seems like Calentine is softening a bit towards his general. I did catch the bit of text when he thought of him as such. :))

"I've got it covered," I tell him with a smile, and go to my General.

I like that you had the general lose, since it nicely set up Calen's sympathetic tendencies. I hope you post more of this soon.
4/15/2012 c4 Just-another-reader
Sorry to ruin your dreams of having a not popular story, but you've got me hooked too! It's really nice to find a good well-written story that's not cliche and overdone. And am I GLAD to see that you've updated recently and plan to do it regularly! I think I would've had a minor epilepsy fit if you weren't planning to. Not to sound like every other whiny reader, but I really just can't help it...hope you update soon! XD Will check back next week!
4/14/2012 c4 sapere
Wow, this is great! What a unique story... I'm really interested in the role of the focus, what it means that a human is one and what powers the general will get.

I love that the general blushes and is all gooey and sappy and loves the sailor! Grrr about people treating him like a dog! Do not like the redhead... Looking fwd to the next update!
4/14/2012 c4 3Siamh
Loving it! I can't wait to see where this goes! :3
4/14/2012 c4 4jammi
I really like the voice of this story and the concept. I like that Calentine hasn't fallen instantly in love with him even though the General is so caught up.

I find it interesting the way some of the Dzali are treating him like a pet but then there's Jara who seems almost human. The General is so besotted, I love how in the beginning he kept blushing though I am curious as to what his magic will be if it does show up.
4/14/2012 c4 tmelange1
This story really is riveting. I think you're doing a great job with your characterizations, and I like that Calentine is struggling to find something in common with his new soulmate. It makes everything more *real*. LOL Bravo! Post more real soon.
4/14/2012 c3 tmelange1
I LOVE this story! It is my new most favorite story in the whole wide world. :)) Bravo!
4/14/2012 c1 tmelange1
This story is outstanding! This first chapter hooked me like a fish, and I don't want to be thrown back in the sea! I wish everyone knew how to write a first chapter like this. Bravo!
4/14/2012 c4 17Mieu-san
This is really excellent! I love your characterization of Calentine-he's turning out to be a really awesome character and very different to boot. I hope he gets to go back to the sea!

The plot is good too and your writing has absolutely perfect flow of which we mere mortals can only dream. I've laughed aloud a couple of times now, so it's safe to say that this is pretty darn funny to boot.

I can't wait to see where you go with this and hope you continue to write a whole lot. Thank you for writing this!
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