
4/14/2012 c3
31emptyword
I'm cackling, still cackling. At this rate, I'll look in the mirror tomorrow and find myself green-faced, slit-eyed, and adorned with a pointy hat and aerodynamic broom. Hm, maybe I should work on this unholy glee over poor Cale's situation.
"there was one mage whose focus was a hide ball" - This sent me off into giggles because no matter which angle I considered, "hide ball" must be an inanimate object.
Also, is it wrong of me to be terribly, terribly fond of Alim? I have a soft spot for the grouchies in a story, and dear Alim must be so horribly jealous of Cale. I really like that he continues to be rude and abrasive toward Cale even after his, er, Soulbrother-slash-hunt-partner(-and-love-of-his-life-rather-than-stepping-stone-for-his-ambition-pretty-please?) nearly killed him for insulting Cale only the night before. Though it does beg the question: would he have acted any different if his General were in the room?
I am so excited for this story. I'm very curious how you came up with the opening concept. Really, I'd just like to camp out in your head someday. Happy writing!

I'm cackling, still cackling. At this rate, I'll look in the mirror tomorrow and find myself green-faced, slit-eyed, and adorned with a pointy hat and aerodynamic broom. Hm, maybe I should work on this unholy glee over poor Cale's situation.
"there was one mage whose focus was a hide ball" - This sent me off into giggles because no matter which angle I considered, "hide ball" must be an inanimate object.
Also, is it wrong of me to be terribly, terribly fond of Alim? I have a soft spot for the grouchies in a story, and dear Alim must be so horribly jealous of Cale. I really like that he continues to be rude and abrasive toward Cale even after his, er, Soulbrother-slash-hunt-partner(-and-love-of-his-life-rather-than-stepping-stone-for-his-ambition-pretty-please?) nearly killed him for insulting Cale only the night before. Though it does beg the question: would he have acted any different if his General were in the room?
I am so excited for this story. I'm very curious how you came up with the opening concept. Really, I'd just like to camp out in your head someday. Happy writing!
4/14/2012 c1 emptyword
I forget how fabulous your writing is.
"The silence between us is as uncomfortable as waking up wet in a pig sty." - XDDD Oh, the analogies sprinkled all over. I cackle over each one. But not just your analogies. EVERYTHING is so entertaining. Love the narrative voice, the direction of the story, the insanely extensive yet gloriously delectable world-building that comes part and parcel with your stories.
This is such a wonderful read. I Cheshire-grinned my entire way through. Nothing could possibly make this any better. Except, perhaps, chocolate.
I forget how fabulous your writing is.
"The silence between us is as uncomfortable as waking up wet in a pig sty." - XDDD Oh, the analogies sprinkled all over. I cackle over each one. But not just your analogies. EVERYTHING is so entertaining. Love the narrative voice, the direction of the story, the insanely extensive yet gloriously delectable world-building that comes part and parcel with your stories.
This is such a wonderful read. I Cheshire-grinned my entire way through. Nothing could possibly make this any better. Except, perhaps, chocolate.
4/14/2012 c3 Jaded Devil
Wow, I'm really enjoying what you've written so far! I have so many questions in my head, but I have a feeling that the answers will be revealed in the coming chapters. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Wow, I'm really enjoying what you've written so far! I have so many questions in my head, but I have a feeling that the answers will be revealed in the coming chapters. I'm looking forward to the next update!
4/12/2012 c3 Anonymous
Pacate is now my new OTP haha :) wonderful story with wonderfully long chapters and a wonderful setting and wonderful characters... Marry meeee so I can have your brainchildren pleaaaasssee
Pacate is now my new OTP haha :) wonderful story with wonderfully long chapters and a wonderful setting and wonderful characters... Marry meeee so I can have your brainchildren pleaaaasssee
4/11/2012 c3 Chibikodo
Haha our dear protagonist is in a real predicament. Whatever can be done? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Haha our dear protagonist is in a real predicament. Whatever can be done? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
4/11/2012 c3 Beej
You are amazing, and I love your brain!
I cant wait till you update again... Actually, Im kinda annoyed at myself for starting this when you've only just begun, cos now I cant read your whole story in one go :(
But! I will be a patient and faithful reader, even if I dont review every chapter!
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You are amazing, and I love your brain!
I cant wait till you update again... Actually, Im kinda annoyed at myself for starting this when you've only just begun, cos now I cant read your whole story in one go :(
But! I will be a patient and faithful reader, even if I dont review every chapter!
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4/10/2012 c3 hikko48
hallelujah and thx for the update! looking forward 2 more nxt time :3
hallelujah and thx for the update! looking forward 2 more nxt time :3
4/10/2012 c3 Arillian
I feel a little drunk on this story. Can't get it out of my head. When I saw you updated I stayed up to readed though I really should've gone to bed by now. Oh well. This story rocks. It was so worth it, ha!
I feel a little drunk on this story. Can't get it out of my head. When I saw you updated I stayed up to readed though I really should've gone to bed by now. Oh well. This story rocks. It was so worth it, ha!
4/9/2012 c2 Arillian
I've just found this story and I must say I adore it. It's so very original and different. I love the strange people, the complex sociaty and overal feel to the world you've created. I can't wait to read more of it. Just wow 3
I've just found this story and I must say I adore it. It's so very original and different. I love the strange people, the complex sociaty and overal feel to the world you've created. I can't wait to read more of it. Just wow 3
4/8/2012 c2 grinning rabid squirrel
More please so good
More please so good
4/5/2012 c2 walnutsalmonds
No need to write battle scenes if you don't want to, unless they're crucial to the story or something. ;)
No need to write battle scenes if you don't want to, unless they're crucial to the story or something. ;)
4/5/2012 c1 iceramystisdabomb
thank you thank you thank you for writing this, im so happy youre getting back into writing fp stories! and im a total sucker for these kinds of fics, so im super excited to read more(:
thank you thank you thank you for writing this, im so happy youre getting back into writing fp stories! and im a total sucker for these kinds of fics, so im super excited to read more(:
4/5/2012 c2 Evina
Eeee, loved it. What a prickly situation they're in; I can't wait to see how they're going to get along once Cale finishes convalescing.
Eeee, loved it. What a prickly situation they're in; I can't wait to see how they're going to get along once Cale finishes convalescing.