
4/1/2012 c1 walnutsalmonds
I can't help but think that the red-headed aide (Alim?) is in love with the General. His hostility towards Cale is pretty shocking and uncalled for, so I think it's the work of the green-eyed monster. But he totally deserved that smackdown from the General and I don't think he deserves an apology.
This is a very interesting first chapter. Keep writing. :)
I can't help but think that the red-headed aide (Alim?) is in love with the General. His hostility towards Cale is pretty shocking and uncalled for, so I think it's the work of the green-eyed monster. But he totally deserved that smackdown from the General and I don't think he deserves an apology.
This is a very interesting first chapter. Keep writing. :)
3/31/2012 c1 ohmytuesday
Loved loved loved it. Seamen and magic, wonderful combination. I await more yummy situations (:
Loved loved loved it. Seamen and magic, wonderful combination. I await more yummy situations (: