for The Sailor's General Superior4/7/2015 c1 Guest
Read this story, fell inlove with it and very single character. Beautiful, well written story. Mad love and respect for this story.
Read this story, fell inlove with it and very single character. Beautiful, well written story. Mad love and respect for this story.
3/20/2015 c8 Moka-girl
Amusing. :)
Amusing. :)
3/20/2015 c2 Moka-girl
Everytime the person has an important job, for the sake of romance he or she will spend more time with their beloved than working and i'll appear normal. It's nice to know Cale thought about the fact the the war needs a general.
Everytime the person has an important job, for the sake of romance he or she will spend more time with their beloved than working and i'll appear normal. It's nice to know Cale thought about the fact the the war needs a general.
3/20/2015 c1 Moka-girl
Wow, this is quite interesting.
Wow, this is quite interesting.
1/19/2015 c26 trymaran
I love this story! The characters are incredibly varied and the worldbuilding is amazing! It's really awesome how you've created such an interesting world which we continue to find out more about. Great story :)
I love this story! The characters are incredibly varied and the worldbuilding is amazing! It's really awesome how you've created such an interesting world which we continue to find out more about. Great story :)
7/31/2014 c19 A Passing Idiot
Whenever you speak of Alim I picture Grell from Kuroshitsuji. This is not right...
Whenever you speak of Alim I picture Grell from Kuroshitsuji. This is not right...
7/19/2014 c1 Faradays
Ah yes, that moment you find a beautiful story with lovely, charming characters only to find out its incompleted and the author hasnt been online in over a year. Fic blues.
Ah yes, that moment you find a beautiful story with lovely, charming characters only to find out its incompleted and the author hasnt been online in over a year. Fic blues.
6/18/2014 c26 MizuAz
I really enjoyed this story! You really kept the protaganist's voice throughout; his personality just shone through beautifully. Used to an ending wrapped in a nice bow, especially for stories with a romantic bent, it was a little hard to find this last chapter so abbreviated. However, now that I've come to the end of this part of the story, I rather like how Calentine is still struggling with what he wants. It's a huge, life-changing decision, and he has two completely different paths wide open to him. I enjoyed how you developed the characters, with Calentine being rough and uneducated, but intelligent and a decent human being, juxtaposed with the stilted, rather formal voice of Asotegi. The scenery described helps the reader really dive into this world. Oh, and I really loved how you kept Calentine's voice so authentic, always having him make similies referring to his understanding of the world as a sailor. Those were tucked in all throughout the story, and it was a very nice way to show the care you took with this tale.
I really, really, REALLY want to start the next one, but it's not complete. I have such a hard time starting stories that haven't been finished and look as though they've been abandoned! I WANT to! I want to read more of Calentine, he's been so much fun! The Corsair's Crown is nice and lengthy, but I'm afraid to jump into it, get emotionally wrapped up, only to be left hanging. I've had unfinished stories stay with me for years, like an itch that can never be scratched. I may delve into The CC, because I really want to follow through with Calentine and Asotegi's relationship (which you've written so, so deliciously). I'll just have to hope that it wasn't abandoned on a major cliffhanger, I suppose. Thank you for posting your work on FP, it's absolutely wonderful to find quality slash writing (even if the slash is delayed til chapter 24...it was worth it!), and I hope you come back!
I really enjoyed this story! You really kept the protaganist's voice throughout; his personality just shone through beautifully. Used to an ending wrapped in a nice bow, especially for stories with a romantic bent, it was a little hard to find this last chapter so abbreviated. However, now that I've come to the end of this part of the story, I rather like how Calentine is still struggling with what he wants. It's a huge, life-changing decision, and he has two completely different paths wide open to him. I enjoyed how you developed the characters, with Calentine being rough and uneducated, but intelligent and a decent human being, juxtaposed with the stilted, rather formal voice of Asotegi. The scenery described helps the reader really dive into this world. Oh, and I really loved how you kept Calentine's voice so authentic, always having him make similies referring to his understanding of the world as a sailor. Those were tucked in all throughout the story, and it was a very nice way to show the care you took with this tale.
I really, really, REALLY want to start the next one, but it's not complete. I have such a hard time starting stories that haven't been finished and look as though they've been abandoned! I WANT to! I want to read more of Calentine, he's been so much fun! The Corsair's Crown is nice and lengthy, but I'm afraid to jump into it, get emotionally wrapped up, only to be left hanging. I've had unfinished stories stay with me for years, like an itch that can never be scratched. I may delve into The CC, because I really want to follow through with Calentine and Asotegi's relationship (which you've written so, so deliciously). I'll just have to hope that it wasn't abandoned on a major cliffhanger, I suppose. Thank you for posting your work on FP, it's absolutely wonderful to find quality slash writing (even if the slash is delayed til chapter 24...it was worth it!), and I hope you come back!
6/18/2014 c1 Wildrop
I've probably read this fic over again way more times than is healthy. Love the characters, love the world they're in, love the whole thing. Thank you for the story!
I've probably read this fic over again way more times than is healthy. Love the characters, love the world they're in, love the whole thing. Thank you for the story!
4/18/2014 c26 So1Thought
You are AMAZING. This is goddarn publishable. Your storytelling flows ever so smoothly, and well, amazing.
Alim reminds me of a slimmer, more slinky, cunning in a devious sexy weird way Snape. Cooooooool.
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You are AMAZING. This is goddarn publishable. Your storytelling flows ever so smoothly, and well, amazing.
Alim reminds me of a slimmer, more slinky, cunning in a devious sexy weird way Snape. Cooooooool.
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4/6/2014 c26 
1rAiNwAtEr1
Words fail me when I try to express how much I adore the characters in this story. The general is truly the most selfless person I've had the pleasure to read without being overly annoying. Cale is just lovely and Nara is a star all her own. I've even taking a shinning to the red haired demon who seems to just need a hug from Cale. I must run over to the next installment before my heart fails me in excitement. Bravo, my dear friend.
1rAiNwAtEr1Words fail me when I try to express how much I adore the characters in this story. The general is truly the most selfless person I've had the pleasure to read without being overly annoying. Cale is just lovely and Nara is a star all her own. I've even taking a shinning to the red haired demon who seems to just need a hug from Cale. I must run over to the next installment before my heart fails me in excitement. Bravo, my dear friend.
3/17/2014 c26 xyz
Thank you so much for sharing this story. I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed the story.
His view point is so interesting and different from what we know and see in this story. (interesting place to keep the lamp oil- under the bed - lol) and the way they try to talk and still fumble about so badly - men! grin
Thank you.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed the story.
His view point is so interesting and different from what we know and see in this story. (interesting place to keep the lamp oil- under the bed - lol) and the way they try to talk and still fumble about so badly - men! grin
Thank you.
2/14/2014 c8 1Gentiane
On this particular day we want to make a confession, that we are absolutely in love with this story and your admirable heroes! Thank you so much!
Happy St. Valentines Day!
1GentianeOn this particular day we want to make a confession, that we are absolutely in love with this story and your admirable heroes! Thank you so much!
Happy St. Valentines Day!
1/26/2014 c19 nutbuster
what's up with Alim? did he give half his life force to Cale? how did Alim become a doctor, anyway? you only gave us a small, small story on him. I'm also quite amused when Helene carried him because I thought she's tiny.
I'm very pleased with the romance. it felt stagnated for a while until they bonded with blankets on more than one occasion. :) it isn't rushed at all, and the emotions Cale begins to feel are wonderfully conveyed. I especially like how he comes to the realization that only Asotegi's touch bothers him. Laris was a very good contrast to add! Asotegi's nervousness was cute, too.
what's up with Alim? did he give half his life force to Cale? how did Alim become a doctor, anyway? you only gave us a small, small story on him. I'm also quite amused when Helene carried him because I thought she's tiny.
I'm very pleased with the romance. it felt stagnated for a while until they bonded with blankets on more than one occasion. :) it isn't rushed at all, and the emotions Cale begins to feel are wonderfully conveyed. I especially like how he comes to the realization that only Asotegi's touch bothers him. Laris was a very good contrast to add! Asotegi's nervousness was cute, too.
1/26/2014 c16 nutbuster
this is pretty confusing-I mean, trying to imagine their talent. I didnt really understand if the fish could still break the surface of the water, but you mentioned "intent," so I'm assuming if it's not to murder someone, the magic won't break..? IE, Cale and his boo are running on water away from crazy axe-murderers, and once they finish crossing the water returns?
I'm also wondering-do Jara and Cale's female cousin both prefer women? what happened to the other captains you introduced us to in the previous chapters? did they die as well? did anyone enter Asotegi and Cale's tent earlier to wake them up? and how about Alim-do people still distrust him?
the story of Eassea is rather cute! I also hope we see more of Laris.
this is pretty confusing-I mean, trying to imagine their talent. I didnt really understand if the fish could still break the surface of the water, but you mentioned "intent," so I'm assuming if it's not to murder someone, the magic won't break..? IE, Cale and his boo are running on water away from crazy axe-murderers, and once they finish crossing the water returns?
I'm also wondering-do Jara and Cale's female cousin both prefer women? what happened to the other captains you introduced us to in the previous chapters? did they die as well? did anyone enter Asotegi and Cale's tent earlier to wake them up? and how about Alim-do people still distrust him?
the story of Eassea is rather cute! I also hope we see more of Laris.