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4/8/2012 c1 thisaccountisclosedthanksbye
When I saw the summary I thought 'Hmm, wonder what "surreal piece" means', and now I definitely see, haha. But yeah, this was an interesting/enjoyable read even if I didn't completely understand it.

The only mistakes I noticed were a (probably typo) slash ('...before his jacket closes/ The puppy...') and 'It's tail begins to wag' in the same sentence-no need for the apostrophe. *takes off pedantic hat*

Anyhoo, I enjoyed this, I'll be sure to check out your other writing :)
4/1/2012 c1 Punslinger
An entertaining bit of surrealism. It held my attention even though I knew it wasn't going anywhere.

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