
7/19/2012 c1
7Saki Kikkio Ohayashi
Omg, that was great, very depresing and sad, I almost cryed. No complaints.

Omg, that was great, very depresing and sad, I almost cryed. No complaints.
6/18/2012 c1
6CrazyLittleGermanMiss
story of my life. i love thios poem. you really have a way with words.

story of my life. i love thios poem. you really have a way with words.
6/11/2012 c1 Punslinger
You certainly covered the subject thoroughly and made us feel the sensation of swallowing the last biter drop of hate. That's why I decided to change my drinking habits.
You certainly covered the subject thoroughly and made us feel the sensation of swallowing the last biter drop of hate. That's why I decided to change my drinking habits.
5/19/2012 c1
8Olena Light
See this is why i love every poet. They always have that one poem that really gets to you. I'll definitely be checking out your other works :) Keep writing!

See this is why i love every poet. They always have that one poem that really gets to you. I'll definitely be checking out your other works :) Keep writing!
4/18/2012 c1
16Shauni Cooper
This was good. You described the concept flawlessly and almost effortlessly. Truthfully and well written. Great job! :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni

This was good. You described the concept flawlessly and almost effortlessly. Truthfully and well written. Great job! :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni
4/7/2012 c1
9Lexy797
Very dark and truthful. I think everyone feels like this sometimes; like you hate yourself and everything around you because it doesn't hurt as much that way. Great job. :)

Very dark and truthful. I think everyone feels like this sometimes; like you hate yourself and everything around you because it doesn't hurt as much that way. Great job. :)
4/5/2012 c1 thisaccountisclosedthanksbye
Very dark and lovely. I hope you don't feel like this too often!
Very dark and lovely. I hope you don't feel like this too often!