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4/15/2012 c2 11MentalBrink
This has a fluid start and fair character development, and although it's shortness hinders it a bit I like it :)
4/12/2012 c2 Punslinger
Nice chapter. The characters are shaping up well.

(A short review for a short chapter.)
4/5/2012 c1 Punslinger
This is a very good introductory chapter. You've set up the characters and plot clearly enough to make readers want to learn what will happen next. I wonder what part Shaya's fascination with magik will play in the story?

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