for Geek To Shiek9/8/2012 c2 
6Anonymous Queen
Heyya! This story has so much potential. It's interesting, unexpected, and yeah, I don't even know what's gonna happen next. (That's a good thing.) I'm already in love with William and it's only been two chapters. He's like a little puppy - innocent, naive (he's like 'I mean, you're my new friend' and they just met), adorable (he stole her sketch book), and really needs to be protected. Sorry if I don't get why the other dudes seem to hate him so much. William's the only decent guy in the story at the moment.
I feel like skinning the rest of them alive for bullying him like that.
On a side note, your dialogue skills are fantastic. I mean, wow, not many people can write that great dialogue.
Update soon! I want to see where is headed. I'll put it on story alert. I hope you continue it and better still, finish it! :DDDDD
-Anon Queen
6Anonymous QueenHeyya! This story has so much potential. It's interesting, unexpected, and yeah, I don't even know what's gonna happen next. (That's a good thing.) I'm already in love with William and it's only been two chapters. He's like a little puppy - innocent, naive (he's like 'I mean, you're my new friend' and they just met), adorable (he stole her sketch book), and really needs to be protected. Sorry if I don't get why the other dudes seem to hate him so much. William's the only decent guy in the story at the moment.
I feel like skinning the rest of them alive for bullying him like that.
On a side note, your dialogue skills are fantastic. I mean, wow, not many people can write that great dialogue.
Update soon! I want to see where is headed. I'll put it on story alert. I hope you continue it and better still, finish it! :DDDDD
-Anon Queen
5/4/2012 c1 Rosella
Whats wrong, aren't u gonna continue with the story, i really liked it.
Whats wrong, aren't u gonna continue with the story, i really liked it.
4/12/2012 c2 1GoldenBaby96
Wow another great story:) poor Will, how could Lins brother be so cruel? :'( ugh, it's ridiculous. I think this story line is really interesting and I can't wait for your next chapter:D
1GoldenBaby96Wow another great story:) poor Will, how could Lins brother be so cruel? :'( ugh, it's ridiculous. I think this story line is really interesting and I can't wait for your next chapter:D
4/12/2012 c2 pinkbutterflygirl
I really like this story and hope you update soon!
Just one tiny problem i have with it Is how the setting changes so quickly and it takes a while for me to catch on its kinda confusing other than that its fantastic can't wait for the next chapter :)
I really like this story and hope you update soon!
Just one tiny problem i have with it Is how the setting changes so quickly and it takes a while for me to catch on its kinda confusing other than that its fantastic can't wait for the next chapter :)