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4/14/2012 c1 36Takano-Isorokyu
Interesting, but very short. Hardly anything yet to comment on. Good, angsty start, but you need to develop the character some more. Looking forward to more.
4/14/2012 c1 3Torches
Interesting. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
4/14/2012 c1 True Talker
It is honestly interesting as it gives a look to the character inside - a deeper look. Yes, you could most definitely expand on this in the form of a story. You could either start of with someting that had happened earlier in the character's life. Or somehting that happened recently to the character. Yes, you can expand upon this if you so wish to. Thank you for sharing this.

By the way every time I think of a mirror being broken I think of that old wives tale in regards to 7 years... it is just my habit.

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