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2renegade01
Awesome story. I like each of your individual characters in their own way ;-)
2renegade01Awesome story. I like each of your individual characters in their own way ;-)
6/2/2014 c1 1Everfew
You made a mistake. You say 'Logan's manky sheets', when it's 'Logan's mangy sheets'. MANGY.
1EverfewYou made a mistake. You say 'Logan's manky sheets', when it's 'Logan's mangy sheets'. MANGY.
5/24/2014 c13 Ava26
Amazing story! Please keep writing morexx
Amazing story! Please keep writing morexx
4/26/2014 c1 10badflower
A very interesting start, you've got me wanting to read more instantly. Good job :)
10badflowerA very interesting start, you've got me wanting to read more instantly. Good job :)
4/15/2014 c13 A.Sawyer
Yet another fantastic chapter! I literally live for these updates, I'm a full blown addict, I don't know what I'm going to do when it's finished and they're all living happily ever after... :P
Great work as always! :)
Yet another fantastic chapter! I literally live for these updates, I'm a full blown addict, I don't know what I'm going to do when it's finished and they're all living happily ever after... :P
Great work as always! :)
1/25/2014 c11 Guest
I wish you'd finish this, I'm just as eager to see Roxie and Logan together as I am to know what the hell went on between him and Jenny!
I wish you'd finish this, I'm just as eager to see Roxie and Logan together as I am to know what the hell went on between him and Jenny!
11/12/2013 c11 1Forlorn-ember
I feel kinda bad for Adam but I'm totalling wishing roxanne hadn't felt any sympathy for him. I'm glad that it's not quite so straight forward - he's a d*ck and a cheater, but has some reason behind it. It's specially great to see that he's conflicted and struggling himself. Makes him more real and less of a character-made-to-drive-the-plot-forward who tend to be two dimensional and stereotypical.
I still love Alex and I can't wait to read more.
1Forlorn-emberI feel kinda bad for Adam but I'm totalling wishing roxanne hadn't felt any sympathy for him. I'm glad that it's not quite so straight forward - he's a d*ck and a cheater, but has some reason behind it. It's specially great to see that he's conflicted and struggling himself. Makes him more real and less of a character-made-to-drive-the-plot-forward who tend to be two dimensional and stereotypical.
I still love Alex and I can't wait to read more.
11/12/2013 c10 Forlorn-ember
Ah ha, I have it figured out. Logan's tutoring freya? Though he could possibly be dating her too, thinking about it otherwise he wouldnt have brought her to his room that one time. I know this is a first draft so there will be discrepancies/mistakes but I'd like to point out that you have a continuation error with Roxie's lecture medicinal chemistry. To me it sounds like she and jenny share that lecture but then there are some comments that suggest they dont. Jenny's comment in the cafe after their first lecture near the beginning being one i think.
Ah ha, I have it figured out. Logan's tutoring freya? Though he could possibly be dating her too, thinking about it otherwise he wouldnt have brought her to his room that one time. I know this is a first draft so there will be discrepancies/mistakes but I'd like to point out that you have a continuation error with Roxie's lecture medicinal chemistry. To me it sounds like she and jenny share that lecture but then there are some comments that suggest they dont. Jenny's comment in the cafe after their first lecture near the beginning being one i think.
11/1/2013 c11 spiritualabandon
I just started reading your story yesterday and just finished Chapter 11. I am loving it so far and can't wait for the next chapter!
I just started reading your story yesterday and just finished Chapter 11. I am loving it so far and can't wait for the next chapter!