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10/28/2013 c11 FlowerGirl55
Ugh there better not be anything going on between freya and Logan -_-
10/28/2013 c11 Martha
This is a really good chapter. Please keep updating I want to read more!
10/27/2013 c11 skye real
I am seriously missing Logan and Roxanne scenes. They are too cute! Adam is the biggest jerk and I am glad she is finished with him for real. Great chapter! Looking forward to your next update.
10/27/2013 c11 lollipop addict
Yeah! Adam's going down! Awesome!
9/30/2013 c10 Martha
This is a really good chapter. Thanks for updating. Please keep updating!
9/30/2013 c10 displacedfemale
I love Roxanne and Logan's relationship, even when they're not strictly on best terms they still have those cute little interactions.
9/29/2013 c10 2GoNe RoGuE
This was a great chapter. Adam didn't really have the right to punch Logan in the face since he was cheating on her first ... but what's done is done and plus, like Logan said, it was probably worth seeing his angry expression. I love how Logan teased her about the appointment... that was kinda funny. Anyway, not much stood out in this chapter, it felt like a filler but I did enjoy reading it. Hopefully the next update won't take as long :D
- Hannah
9/3/2013 c9 7E.Nelson
I'm impressed with this story - it's unfolding quite well and I'm eager to read more. It's not too rushed, really, and your characters are developing nicely. Keep up the good work, I wanna read more soon!
I keep picturing the scene with a jealous Freya at Red's in my mind. :)
9/1/2013 c9 displacedfemale
i'm not sure if i wanted to see Rox and co take revenge on Adam or not.

I love the awkward interaction between Rox and Logan now and I'm hugely curious as to the real deal behind Jenny's awkardness regarding her Logan situation. I'm thinking that there was more to the reasons he gave her for not making a go of things than she's letting on. Also there has to be a reason that Alex has let it slide with so little fuss that Rox and Logan slept together.

So many questions! I'm totally hooked and intrigued by this fic. Cannot wait for the next update! :)
9/1/2013 c9 Martha
This is a great chapter. Please keep updating, this story's really good!
8/26/2013 c1 Guest
So sad you didn't win :'( I voted for you!
8/24/2013 c8 Martha
I voted for you! I love Logan and Roxanne's relationship, they're so funny! Please keep updating!
8/19/2013 c8 5prettybabe24
Jeeze. Dude. I love this story! I'm like addicted to it and whenever I see that you have updated it I immediately try to read it!
8/19/2013 c8 33FLIPPER66
i'm really enjoying this story
8/19/2013 c8 1Forlorn-ember
Finally! Congratz on your nomination, I noticed your name on the list. Good luck. I love your story.
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