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16Shauni Cooper
Brilliant! Angst and mourning are very well present and presented in this piece. I enjoyed it and you are definitely off to a good start. Keep writing! You are doing very well! :)
-Shauni
16Shauni CooperBrilliant! Angst and mourning are very well present and presented in this piece. I enjoyed it and you are definitely off to a good start. Keep writing! You are doing very well! :)
-Shauni