for Bruises and Scars12/4/2012 c1 
26All Along
This one is just haunting. It doesn't matter how the narrator became bruised and scarred - scar tissue tells its own truths, and reminds us of where we have been, but not, let's hope, of who we now are. Again, just beautiful. Stunningly so.
26All AlongThis one is just haunting. It doesn't matter how the narrator became bruised and scarred - scar tissue tells its own truths, and reminds us of where we have been, but not, let's hope, of who we now are. Again, just beautiful. Stunningly so.
5/17/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
I like this poem, honestly I do, but I didn't feel it was one of your strongest, but it was done really well, don't get me wrong. Amazing job, but try going a little deeper if you can in this type of poetry writing. (pleaseeeee don't take this criticism the wrong way. I mean it in the nicest way possible, honestly I do.) Amamzing job, keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraI like this poem, honestly I do, but I didn't feel it was one of your strongest, but it was done really well, don't get me wrong. Amazing job, but try going a little deeper if you can in this type of poetry writing. (pleaseeeee don't take this criticism the wrong way. I mean it in the nicest way possible, honestly I do.) Amamzing job, keep it up .