for Real?5/19/2012 c1 
15Natari Mirumura
Very nice and well done. Something that is unique is what this poem is. Awesome job, keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraVery nice and well done. Something that is unique is what this poem is. Awesome job, keep it up .
5/1/2012 c1 16Shauni Cooper
This is good. I loved your choice of words and I can really feel the emotions being portrayed here. Well done! Keep writing! Don't stop everything because someone let you down! :) ;)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni
16Shauni CooperThis is good. I loved your choice of words and I can really feel the emotions being portrayed here. Well done! Keep writing! Don't stop everything because someone let you down! :) ;)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni