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7/19/2012 c1 7Saki Kikkio Ohayashi
God who ever you wrote this about is a real dick head.
7/15/2012 c1 16Brokenm3
That was really awesome.
6/26/2012 c1 1Nalledia
Wow… this is an incredibly bitter poem! Excellent, as always. I love how your poems always rhyme… that's just something I can't get right. Well written!
6/18/2012 c1 6CrazyLittleGermanMiss
this poem was nice. I totally get the emotions conveyed.

I especially liked the line that said

I learned not to trust and love.

Now I hate...all the above.

good job with this.
6/14/2012 c1 11a-creative-name
Me and my friend read this and we love this! Great job! We had some rough times and it really touched me! Great job!
6/7/2012 c1 7MoonstoneRoses
I usually dont do poetry, and I saw you reviewed my one and ONLY poem, lol. so I wanted to read yours. This one... brings back memories from back when. A deep poem, very good. :)
6/5/2012 c1 2LATTANZI
I like this a lot. I've gone through a similar experience and I think this pretty much sums it up. In all, I though it wa svery powerful.
5/28/2012 c1 18duchessgummybuns
this poem was really good. i can definitely relate to the emotion that you put into this.
5/22/2012 c1 10DappledKarma
It was so depressing, a good kind of depressing. Keep it up. :)
5/20/2012 c1 TheTickingNeverStops
Great poem. Basic, but powerful. I can read the emotion between the lines. :]
5/15/2012 c1 45Onearmwonder21
I loved this, fantastic poem.

Kitty
5/13/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Wow. Vary powerful. I only saw one mistake. This is really awesome.
5/3/2012 c1 13Sir Scott
That's sad to be made a fool of. Good poem. Although, I think you Oh, boy did I die in vain.

Keep on writing.

~SirScott
5/2/2012 c1 7bibliotaku748
Holy crap. This is sooo good. I can completely relate to this and it actually makes me THINK. Wow, just wow.
4/20/2012 c1 378my.life.is.over
Very nice. I like it. Keep it up, yes? :P Good job.
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