
6/26/2012 c1
1Nalledia
Wow… this is an incredibly bitter poem! Excellent, as always. I love how your poems always rhyme… that's just something I can't get right. Well written!

Wow… this is an incredibly bitter poem! Excellent, as always. I love how your poems always rhyme… that's just something I can't get right. Well written!
6/18/2012 c1
6CrazyLittleGermanMiss
this poem was nice. I totally get the emotions conveyed.
I especially liked the line that said
I learned not to trust and love.
Now I hate...all the above.
good job with this.

this poem was nice. I totally get the emotions conveyed.
I especially liked the line that said
I learned not to trust and love.
Now I hate...all the above.
good job with this.
6/14/2012 c1
11a-creative-name
Me and my friend read this and we love this! Great job! We had some rough times and it really touched me! Great job!

Me and my friend read this and we love this! Great job! We had some rough times and it really touched me! Great job!
6/7/2012 c1
7MoonstoneRoses
I usually dont do poetry, and I saw you reviewed my one and ONLY poem, lol. so I wanted to read yours. This one... brings back memories from back when. A deep poem, very good. :)

I usually dont do poetry, and I saw you reviewed my one and ONLY poem, lol. so I wanted to read yours. This one... brings back memories from back when. A deep poem, very good. :)
6/5/2012 c1
2LATTANZI
I like this a lot. I've gone through a similar experience and I think this pretty much sums it up. In all, I though it wa svery powerful.

I like this a lot. I've gone through a similar experience and I think this pretty much sums it up. In all, I though it wa svery powerful.
5/28/2012 c1
18duchessgummybuns
this poem was really good. i can definitely relate to the emotion that you put into this.

this poem was really good. i can definitely relate to the emotion that you put into this.
5/20/2012 c1 TheTickingNeverStops
Great poem. Basic, but powerful. I can read the emotion between the lines. :]
Great poem. Basic, but powerful. I can read the emotion between the lines. :]
5/3/2012 c1
2Sir Scott
That's sad to be made a fool of. Good poem. Although, I think you Oh, boy did I die in vain.
Keep on writing.
~SirScott

That's sad to be made a fool of. Good poem. Although, I think you Oh, boy did I die in vain.
Keep on writing.
~SirScott
5/2/2012 c1
7bibliotaku748
Holy crap. This is sooo good. I can completely relate to this and it actually makes me THINK. Wow, just wow.

Holy crap. This is sooo good. I can completely relate to this and it actually makes me THINK. Wow, just wow.