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9/7/2022 c1 1Mecha Wizard
Wow, that's something.

This is, I feel, a tale about self-confidence, or lack thereof, the pressure of society to fit certain standards, and how it can spiral out of control and ruin someone's life.

Quite interesting.
4/27/2014 c1 Carolyn Ann Aish
EXCELLENT fable - sad too because this is exactly what happens in real life with anorexia taken to the extreme - Well done.
12/16/2013 c1 1echogirlcapri
This is a very good fable! I'm impressed. Is this original - as in, you came up with it yourself? If so you deserve some applause! You are an amazing writer :)
3/23/2013 c1 287Archia
Oh she wished herself too thin to survive. I think there's a wonderfully told meaning in this and the form is very nicely done. I will include it in the community, it fits in there and it's a very good story.
1/10/2013 c1 1panultimate
A wonderfully written tale. And sting! That goes right to the heart. The message is perfectly clear and well portrayed.
12/17/2012 c1 4ImmanenceEnsured
Beautiful:) that's all I have to say I'm afraid.
12/16/2012 c1 Writing-Is-Fun
This is quite a unique tale. Good job...
12/7/2012 c1 13Sir Scott
Good story, she should have quit while she was ahead.
4/24/2012 c1 8PalindromeIsntOne
This is a lovely written fic, lightly but meaningfully told with a simple but neat and effective ending. Nice use of language with just enough words to capture her at each stage.

About interactive fics - I often wish they were allowed to, but alas.

Happy writing!

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