
6/29/2013 c24
19Alaeryel
Well I hate to see this end myself Anne BUT am thrilled you have another sequel to this and I am dying to read it too! YAY for Torryn-I am glad she stood her ground and now the boys have eaten filth! They really don't know what they have lost because of their immaturity do they? AMAZING story, BRILLIANT writing and INTENSITY of plot!

Well I hate to see this end myself Anne BUT am thrilled you have another sequel to this and I am dying to read it too! YAY for Torryn-I am glad she stood her ground and now the boys have eaten filth! They really don't know what they have lost because of their immaturity do they? AMAZING story, BRILLIANT writing and INTENSITY of plot!
6/29/2013 c23 Alaeryel
HOLY HELL-that is what made Caleb so strong-YAY for Skylar figuring it out and taking care of the matter! DAMN I was beginning to wonder what was going to happen next! I AM THRILLED they are all fine if not beaten up badly! I am so ENTRANCED with this story girl-EXCEPTIONAL JOB WITH IT!
HOLY HELL-that is what made Caleb so strong-YAY for Skylar figuring it out and taking care of the matter! DAMN I was beginning to wonder what was going to happen next! I AM THRILLED they are all fine if not beaten up badly! I am so ENTRANCED with this story girl-EXCEPTIONAL JOB WITH IT!
6/29/2013 c22 Alaeryel
DAMN DAMN AND DOUBLE DAMN! This was too DAMN INTENSE and I nearly died holding my breath Anne! AMAZING chapter and more questions-well one specific one-what the hell were the undead on? They seemed to have gotten something that made them seem more invincible than the others! I know Torryn has to come out of this alive but the 'how' is puzzling me! FANTASTIC WRITING AGAIN!
DAMN DAMN AND DOUBLE DAMN! This was too DAMN INTENSE and I nearly died holding my breath Anne! AMAZING chapter and more questions-well one specific one-what the hell were the undead on? They seemed to have gotten something that made them seem more invincible than the others! I know Torryn has to come out of this alive but the 'how' is puzzling me! FANTASTIC WRITING AGAIN!
6/29/2013 c21 Alaeryel
LOVED IT GIRL! I like the idea of a three way-LOL! Thank god I have an open mind-LOL again! It is a wonderful story Amondra and just can't get enough of it. It has been some time at reading-our computer crashed almost a month ago and we just got our new one 3-4 days ago so I am back!
LOVED IT GIRL! I like the idea of a three way-LOL! Thank god I have an open mind-LOL again! It is a wonderful story Amondra and just can't get enough of it. It has been some time at reading-our computer crashed almost a month ago and we just got our new one 3-4 days ago so I am back!
6/7/2013 c23 darkminathegone
Amazing chapter. I knew Torryn would be the first to hit Caleb but she can't die.
Amazing chapter. I knew Torryn would be the first to hit Caleb but she can't die.
5/21/2013 c20
19Alaeryel
OH MY OH MY I REALLY THINK I AM GONNA DIE! ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY WONDERFUL and HOT! Polyamory huh? It sounds DIVINE, HEAVENLY! It would be a perfect solution to their quandary Anne and I wonder if Torryn would want that myself-HELL I KNOW I DON'T THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO DECIDE!

OH MY OH MY I REALLY THINK I AM GONNA DIE! ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY WONDERFUL and HOT! Polyamory huh? It sounds DIVINE, HEAVENLY! It would be a perfect solution to their quandary Anne and I wonder if Torryn would want that myself-HELL I KNOW I DON'T THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO DECIDE!
5/1/2013 c19
19Alaeryel
Another MARVELOUS chapter here Lysse-I am liking Becca more and more here and I still like Torryn and Antony together but there is something about Skylar too that I LOVE TO DEATH and the fight between the two of them was HOT and SENSUAL! MAGNIFICENT JOB GIRL!

Another MARVELOUS chapter here Lysse-I am liking Becca more and more here and I still like Torryn and Antony together but there is something about Skylar too that I LOVE TO DEATH and the fight between the two of them was HOT and SENSUAL! MAGNIFICENT JOB GIRL!
4/28/2013 c19
8darkminathegone
O.o don't tell me they're going to sleep with other people... hurry with the next chapter please

O.o don't tell me they're going to sleep with other people... hurry with the next chapter please
3/25/2013 c18
19Alaeryel
DAMN BLOODY BRILLIANT GIRL! Oh how I wanted to see Caleb turn to dust BUT I have to admit that Antony was right. They had already dealt with one big fight already and needed their rest. I am beginning to like Becca more and more right now and hope she continues to have some resemblance of humanity in her undead body. She has gone up in my book especially at saving Torryn's mother. I do feel bad for Alexis even tho I am not sure how I really felt about her-more towards not liking her only because she tried to get Antony into bed with her. I cannot wait for another chapter and more of this AMAZING STORY!

DAMN BLOODY BRILLIANT GIRL! Oh how I wanted to see Caleb turn to dust BUT I have to admit that Antony was right. They had already dealt with one big fight already and needed their rest. I am beginning to like Becca more and more right now and hope she continues to have some resemblance of humanity in her undead body. She has gone up in my book especially at saving Torryn's mother. I do feel bad for Alexis even tho I am not sure how I really felt about her-more towards not liking her only because she tried to get Antony into bed with her. I cannot wait for another chapter and more of this AMAZING STORY!
3/15/2013 c18
8darkminathegone
Ahh I can't wait for more! I just noticed you have names from Julius Caesar. I never noticed before because I didn't start learning about Julius Caesar until about a week ago.

Ahh I can't wait for more! I just noticed you have names from Julius Caesar. I never noticed before because I didn't start learning about Julius Caesar until about a week ago.
3/4/2013 c17
19Alaeryel
DAMN IT TO HELL girl-BRILLIANTLY DONE AND AMAZING STORY! I cannot wait for more of this and will always be watching for it! MAGNIFICENT TALENT you have displayed! GO TORRYN! She has survived and everyone is ok at this time. It was INTENSE and SUSPENSEFUL full of action and brilliance! I will be bouncing all over to see what happens next!

DAMN IT TO HELL girl-BRILLIANTLY DONE AND AMAZING STORY! I cannot wait for more of this and will always be watching for it! MAGNIFICENT TALENT you have displayed! GO TORRYN! She has survived and everyone is ok at this time. It was INTENSE and SUSPENSEFUL full of action and brilliance! I will be bouncing all over to see what happens next!