for 5 Things9/23/2012 c1 Guest
I love how your mood is so joyful, then packs a punch of lingering grimness. The poem seemed almost determined.
I love how your mood is so joyful, then packs a punch of lingering grimness. The poem seemed almost determined.
8/3/2012 c1 
23Love A Mysterious Thing
Lovely! I love love love this. Shows the beauty of religion which some of us fail to see.
23Love A Mysterious ThingLovely! I love love love this. Shows the beauty of religion which some of us fail to see.
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
Very true. It's so much better to focus on what we do have than don't. Good job!
112Stonehartdreamer27Very true. It's so much better to focus on what we do have than don't. Good job!
5/31/2012 c1 24Pzychotic
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Wow I didn't visit FP in a while and you've written some amazing things!
I love your appreciation for simple things...it's beautiful and so honest. That's what I really like about your writing. I'm happy I met you on FP because you are a precious writer!
24PzychoticOMGOEJFWOIEJFOW
Wow I didn't visit FP in a while and you've written some amazing things!
I love your appreciation for simple things...it's beautiful and so honest. That's what I really like about your writing. I'm happy I met you on FP because you are a precious writer!
5/29/2012 c1 10Valenteen
Very appreciative- I like it. The way you described the fruit was incredible! It's good.
10ValenteenVery appreciative- I like it. The way you described the fruit was incredible! It's good.
5/17/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
This poem was soooo amazing. I love how you four of the five senses and added as your last sence the abilities God gave you. BEAUTIFULLLL. Keep it up girl .
15Natari MirumuraThis poem was soooo amazing. I love how you four of the five senses and added as your last sence the abilities God gave you. BEAUTIFULLLL. Keep it up girl .
5/9/2012 c1 15katrrat
wow. that's mesmerizing. I could almost picture and sense the smell of jasmine and apples! Extremely graphic and schematic. Well done, my friend!
- kaykay
15katrratwow. that's mesmerizing. I could almost picture and sense the smell of jasmine and apples! Extremely graphic and schematic. Well done, my friend!
- kaykay
5/7/2012 c1 John 8.36
This is so great! Your word choices are so perfect and provide such a great picture for the reader. I have read all your stories/poems and they are fantastic! You are a very talented writer!
This is so great! Your word choices are so perfect and provide such a great picture for the reader. I have read all your stories/poems and they are fantastic! You are a very talented writer!
5/2/2012 c1 12Pinchen
That's beautiful!
The idea is great and I like the way you show not only the good things, but also some sad aspects of life.
(:
12PinchenThat's beautiful!
The idea is great and I like the way you show not only the good things, but also some sad aspects of life.
(:
4/28/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
I loved it! I loved how with each sense there was something good and something bad.
Good luck with your writing, hope you're on a roll. :D
16Meadow FrostI loved it! I loved how with each sense there was something good and something bad.
Good luck with your writing, hope you're on a roll. :D