11/6/2014 c1 Guest
Perfection :")
Perfection :")
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
Lol I didn't know that, but I'll be sure to say it from now on and make my friends go crazy. I'm in for anything fancy. lol. Once again, a very beautiful poem. Keep it up!
Lol I didn't know that, but I'll be sure to say it from now on and make my friends go crazy. I'm in for anything fancy. lol. Once again, a very beautiful poem. Keep it up!
5/17/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
I love this poem! Especially towards the end! It just made an excellent turn for the better! keep it up, .
I love this poem! Especially towards the end! It just made an excellent turn for the better! keep it up, .
5/9/2012 c1 8Emmeline Alicia Mary
I love all your fancy words! Very nice structure and I love your style! Keep it up!
Great work,
Emmeline Alicia Mary
I love all your fancy words! Very nice structure and I love your style! Keep it up!
Great work,
Emmeline Alicia Mary
5/9/2012 c1 15katrrat
This was fascinating! Despite the fact that it's a romance poem I love how you didn't make it look sobby or too cliche. This is the ideal state of romance for me! The flow and the words you've chosen are fantastic and the end nearly made me shiver! Brilliant job :) Definitely keep it up!
- kaykay
This was fascinating! Despite the fact that it's a romance poem I love how you didn't make it look sobby or too cliche. This is the ideal state of romance for me! The flow and the words you've chosen are fantastic and the end nearly made me shiver! Brilliant job :) Definitely keep it up!
- kaykay
4/28/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
The way it's written has a vary elegant and beautiful feel to it, I don't know if I can explain it right... like dancing on air? Drifting gently across the refreshing waters surface? sounds weird I know, but I don't know how to explain it...
The way it's written has a vary elegant and beautiful feel to it, I don't know if I can explain it right... like dancing on air? Drifting gently across the refreshing waters surface? sounds weird I know, but I don't know how to explain it...