for Everything I Need4/18/2014 c20 
2SkyBlue1309
Wow. I really liked that. Super cute n really refreshing. I was laughing n crying (not literally crying) but I really liked it. How it was a love story, but it wasn't that instantly, dramatic, intense love that we often get in romance novels n I think u wrote it so well. U really addressed the issue as well as so many others n also the fact that u didn't have anyone's issue be so intense, like she was raped (overdone) and so on so forth. It was just so good, and a great reminder how we all have stories to tell that r incredibly important to is in our own way and really define who we are, and might not seem important but really are. N it's also a lesson to writers with how u don't need to make something so horrible (I.e. Rape) to make a story unique or interesting, its about how u write it n I think u really got that. I don't think I'll read the continuation of ur characters, I adored these to much, it's just me personally but this was so creative n I must say I learned a lot, and that's what I'm always trying to get with all my readings. Loved it :)
2SkyBlue1309Wow. I really liked that. Super cute n really refreshing. I was laughing n crying (not literally crying) but I really liked it. How it was a love story, but it wasn't that instantly, dramatic, intense love that we often get in romance novels n I think u wrote it so well. U really addressed the issue as well as so many others n also the fact that u didn't have anyone's issue be so intense, like she was raped (overdone) and so on so forth. It was just so good, and a great reminder how we all have stories to tell that r incredibly important to is in our own way and really define who we are, and might not seem important but really are. N it's also a lesson to writers with how u don't need to make something so horrible (I.e. Rape) to make a story unique or interesting, its about how u write it n I think u really got that. I don't think I'll read the continuation of ur characters, I adored these to much, it's just me personally but this was so creative n I must say I learned a lot, and that's what I'm always trying to get with all my readings. Loved it :)
12/14/2013 c20 6Carmel March
Hi, so sorry for my terrible lack of reviewing. University was absolutely hectic. I just caught up with this story and I absolutely enjoyed the ending! Thanks for sharing this with us, and I hope all is well :)
6Carmel MarchHi, so sorry for my terrible lack of reviewing. University was absolutely hectic. I just caught up with this story and I absolutely enjoyed the ending! Thanks for sharing this with us, and I hope all is well :)
11/15/2013 c1 Sally
So I'm the 151th reviewer huh? *growls* but oh well! Your e-book is really awesome! I can't believe you didn't have more than 150 reviews! It derserves more than a thousand! Apparently good deep stories aren't liked by many ppl! They need a good 'brain-awakener'. :p
Your stories are deep And the language is really good; took me a few readings for places where you're showing Rad's deep insights with Raph.
Hope you write more, while I go and checkout your other stories :p
So I'm the 151th reviewer huh? *growls* but oh well! Your e-book is really awesome! I can't believe you didn't have more than 150 reviews! It derserves more than a thousand! Apparently good deep stories aren't liked by many ppl! They need a good 'brain-awakener'. :p
Your stories are deep And the language is really good; took me a few readings for places where you're showing Rad's deep insights with Raph.
Hope you write more, while I go and checkout your other stories :p
10/17/2013 c3 4R. Ficst
I love the descriptive language chosen for the imagery in this chapter. Some great writing.
4R. FicstI love the descriptive language chosen for the imagery in this chapter. Some great writing.
10/1/2013 c20 1Damned to heaven
Is is possible to get a list of all the books/authors mentioned in here, need a reprieve from all the mindless fluff you see.
:)
1Damned to heavenIs is possible to get a list of all the books/authors mentioned in here, need a reprieve from all the mindless fluff you see.
:)
7/31/2013 c20 7E.Nelson
*sniffles* I loved this. I really did. Enough so to stay up till 12:30 am to finish it. Well done!
7E.Nelson*sniffles* I loved this. I really did. Enough so to stay up till 12:30 am to finish it. Well done!
7/23/2013 c1 1SardonyxRosetta
This was beautiful and gorgeous and lovely and thank you so much for letting this be a thing that exists for others to read. Props to you.
1SardonyxRosettaThis was beautiful and gorgeous and lovely and thank you so much for letting this be a thing that exists for others to read. Props to you.
7/20/2013 c1 JeansKindaGirl
Hey there, stumbled upon your story like a day ago, read the summary , started reading then BAM, i was in love.
The way you slowly developed Raphael and Ariadne's relationship throughout the story so that it didn't seem rushed and a bit all over the place was great. Can't wait to read Chelsea's story!
Hey there, stumbled upon your story like a day ago, read the summary , started reading then BAM, i was in love.
The way you slowly developed Raphael and Ariadne's relationship throughout the story so that it didn't seem rushed and a bit all over the place was great. Can't wait to read Chelsea's story!
7/20/2013 c20 3fallingWish
...It's over?
...Just like that?
...SOPHIE I WANT MORE
BUT ON THE OTHER HAND THIS WAS A REALLY NICE WAY TO END THEIR STORY LIKE WOW
On another note, you're slacking in your editing skills again:
"I'd gone to the room we'd shared [one] last time,..."
"First of all, because I barged in on him right in the middle of class." You can take out the because, unless you want to reword that section of the chapter to fit it in. Probably easier to just take the because out, especially since you don't use because in the next part ("Second of all...").
"I noticed she'd moved to a corner of the room instead of the center, and [a] faint pang of guilt shot through me again,..."
"Uriah went next, and I was surprised by how much stronger his voice sounded as he [read us] a poem that went from choppy to smoother, a demonstration of his progress in writing." You have some extra words in there, probably from when you were first wording that sentence.
"'I'm [saying?] you have promise, and that when you aren't feeling particularly resentful towards the creative writing teacher who shot down all your ideas, you'll come here and visit.'" Using "telling" there seems a bit awkward, and gives the sentence a different feeling. Unless you were trying to say "I'm telling you you have promise"? Either way, that part is worded a bit awkwardly.
And now I am done editing and can only screech in anticipation as I await Chelsea's story because damn am I excited.
Also I really want to know how many classes she skipped and what they did while she wasn't there because holy shit wow there was this sudden growth in the class.
Also I kind of want to know what Uriah's work was like, cause it sounds like it would have been an interesting read if you had written it out. Brian's, too, though we don't actually know much about him. And does Raph not have to write anything?
You've done a nice job actually finishing this story! : ) I am now excited to meet the "very adorable Ukrainian waiter," as you described him. I look forward to the first chapter of Chelsea's story!
3fallingWish...It's over?
...Just like that?
...SOPHIE I WANT MORE
BUT ON THE OTHER HAND THIS WAS A REALLY NICE WAY TO END THEIR STORY LIKE WOW
On another note, you're slacking in your editing skills again:
"I'd gone to the room we'd shared [one] last time,..."
"First of all, because I barged in on him right in the middle of class." You can take out the because, unless you want to reword that section of the chapter to fit it in. Probably easier to just take the because out, especially since you don't use because in the next part ("Second of all...").
"I noticed she'd moved to a corner of the room instead of the center, and [a] faint pang of guilt shot through me again,..."
"Uriah went next, and I was surprised by how much stronger his voice sounded as he [read us] a poem that went from choppy to smoother, a demonstration of his progress in writing." You have some extra words in there, probably from when you were first wording that sentence.
"'I'm [saying?] you have promise, and that when you aren't feeling particularly resentful towards the creative writing teacher who shot down all your ideas, you'll come here and visit.'" Using "telling" there seems a bit awkward, and gives the sentence a different feeling. Unless you were trying to say "I'm telling you you have promise"? Either way, that part is worded a bit awkwardly.
And now I am done editing and can only screech in anticipation as I await Chelsea's story because damn am I excited.
Also I really want to know how many classes she skipped and what they did while she wasn't there because holy shit wow there was this sudden growth in the class.
Also I kind of want to know what Uriah's work was like, cause it sounds like it would have been an interesting read if you had written it out. Brian's, too, though we don't actually know much about him. And does Raph not have to write anything?
You've done a nice job actually finishing this story! : ) I am now excited to meet the "very adorable Ukrainian waiter," as you described him. I look forward to the first chapter of Chelsea's story!
7/19/2013 c20 72898
Awww...I'm sad that its over. But everything must come to an end (cliche, I know).
Awww...I'm sad that its over. But everything must come to an end (cliche, I know).
7/16/2013 c5 Nutcase Enthusiast
This adventure is everything I have ever wanted to write therefore I am entirely jealous and that is a huge compliment. Please don't let this story be a bomb i.e. ending in death, becoming cliche (too lazy to put the accent on the 'e'), or something of the sort. Thank you for writing witty, sarcastic, mysterious, and relatable material.
This adventure is everything I have ever wanted to write therefore I am entirely jealous and that is a huge compliment. Please don't let this story be a bomb i.e. ending in death, becoming cliche (too lazy to put the accent on the 'e'), or something of the sort. Thank you for writing witty, sarcastic, mysterious, and relatable material.
7/15/2013 c19 leavemeialone
I am so glad I stumbled and found this story! I absolutely love it! The characters are so amazing. Reading it, I get so much emotions from every chapter. It breaks your heart at some scenes and it makes you smile in other scenes. I love how similar the two are and the two help each other when times are tough. Of course, you slowly and beautifully shed the depths of Ariadne and Raphael. I love reading every chapter, especially the last couple. It was great finally understanding where Ariadne was coming from. It was nice seeing the characters finally dealing with their problems. Thank you for writing this awesome story! P.S. I love how Raphael is such a romantic! XD
I am so glad I stumbled and found this story! I absolutely love it! The characters are so amazing. Reading it, I get so much emotions from every chapter. It breaks your heart at some scenes and it makes you smile in other scenes. I love how similar the two are and the two help each other when times are tough. Of course, you slowly and beautifully shed the depths of Ariadne and Raphael. I love reading every chapter, especially the last couple. It was great finally understanding where Ariadne was coming from. It was nice seeing the characters finally dealing with their problems. Thank you for writing this awesome story! P.S. I love how Raphael is such a romantic! XD