for Last Wish6/9/2017 c1 
9notawriter03
To be honest, I am having tears in my eyes.
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This was really heartmelting and beautiful. I am short of words to praise this AWESOME work!
-Love,
sillybooklover1724
9notawriter03To be honest, I am having tears in my eyes.
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This was really heartmelting and beautiful. I am short of words to praise this AWESOME work!
-Love,
sillybooklover1724
11/8/2013 c1 19Alaeryel
OH MY GOD! What an AMAZING, HEART WRENCHING, EMOTIONAL snippet here! I am bawling my eyes out so if I misspell anything it is your fault! Though it was dark to a sense of it all-YOU WROTE IT IMMENSELY WELL! I can see where you can take this and make it a complete story but it doesn't have to-it is BEYOND BRILLIANT by itself and the words he wrote afterwards-my GOD I CAN'T BREATHE! I think this deserves an Emmy myself!
19AlaeryelOH MY GOD! What an AMAZING, HEART WRENCHING, EMOTIONAL snippet here! I am bawling my eyes out so if I misspell anything it is your fault! Though it was dark to a sense of it all-YOU WROTE IT IMMENSELY WELL! I can see where you can take this and make it a complete story but it doesn't have to-it is BEYOND BRILLIANT by itself and the words he wrote afterwards-my GOD I CAN'T BREATHE! I think this deserves an Emmy myself!
4/1/2013 c1 Guest
That is so sad ! I'm crying right now and it's so hard to make me cry ! Amazing one shot
That is so sad ! I'm crying right now and it's so hard to make me cry ! Amazing one shot
11/4/2012 c1 30gabijaluvs2rite
;_; That's heart-breaking, but he did the right thing. That's true love, right there. Girl says she'll die for him. Guy replies she won't have to.
30gabijaluvs2rite;_; That's heart-breaking, but he did the right thing. That's true love, right there. Girl says she'll die for him. Guy replies she won't have to.
9/22/2012 c1 32The Siege
HUUUUUUH I didn't review this when I read it months ago?! Well, I'm reviewing now.
This was so beautiful. And sad. A little morbid, but still so eloquent.
Please write more because I want to know what's gonna happen to Sofia!
Also, please clarify: David didn't bring a gun so did he also NOT commit suicide? Because the ending kinda makes it seem like he was about to go kill himself. :(
32The SiegeHUUUUUUH I didn't review this when I read it months ago?! Well, I'm reviewing now.
This was so beautiful. And sad. A little morbid, but still so eloquent.
Please write more because I want to know what's gonna happen to Sofia!
Also, please clarify: David didn't bring a gun so did he also NOT commit suicide? Because the ending kinda makes it seem like he was about to go kill himself. :(
8/5/2012 c1 hydrogen
I thought that this was a one shot? There is further continuation?
I thought that this was a one shot? There is further continuation?
7/27/2012 c1 19toffeecakesxox
oh my goodness. what. why. what. stories like this make my heart hurt.
but you executed it perfectly. :)
19toffeecakesxoxoh my goodness. what. why. what. stories like this make my heart hurt.
but you executed it perfectly. :)
7/16/2012 c1 Bubbly Girl
Depressing but it is totally sucking me in. Please update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
Depressing but it is totally sucking me in. Please update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
6/8/2012 c1 Ditto123
Ugh, FP won't let me go into my account so I can't Favorite this!
I can honestly say that this made me cry. It's sooo sad :'( And David actually loves her enough that he tricked her into not giving up her life for him.
Okay, yeah now I just can't stop crying :'((
Ugh, FP won't let me go into my account so I can't Favorite this!
I can honestly say that this made me cry. It's sooo sad :'( And David actually loves her enough that he tricked her into not giving up her life for him.
Okay, yeah now I just can't stop crying :'((
5/2/2012 c1 endorphins
This is so sad. What could be worse than losing someone you love so so much? :/ This is an amazing first chapter and I do hope you update soon!
This is so sad. What could be worse than losing someone you love so so much? :/ This is an amazing first chapter and I do hope you update soon!
4/29/2012 c1 PillowPetter
It was amazing. I hated how he left her in the field! Like ughh why ! But wouldn't the mother being wondering why David knew Sofia was in the soccer field and didn't move her to somewhere else? Just saying. But overall it was awesome.
It was amazing. I hated how he left her in the field! Like ughh why ! But wouldn't the mother being wondering why David knew Sofia was in the soccer field and didn't move her to somewhere else? Just saying. But overall it was awesome.