for A Sinner's Confusion4/30/2012 c1 
2Diane Young
There is a definite spark in your writing. My only recommendation would be to look into structure, rhythm, and mechanics some more. You have a lot of potential.
2Diane YoungThere is a definite spark in your writing. My only recommendation would be to look into structure, rhythm, and mechanics some more. You have a lot of potential.
4/29/2012 c1 49Hope's Demise
I like this. wish I able to write more elaborate praise. My reviews don't say much for my own writing ability. but there you have it. I liked it.
49Hope's DemiseI like this. wish I able to write more elaborate praise. My reviews don't say much for my own writing ability. but there you have it. I liked it.