for The Princess and the Prince10/10/2014 c1 Sara
Great first chapter your a really good writer all the other writers have typos and stuff but ur great
Great first chapter your a really good writer all the other writers have typos and stuff but ur great
2/9/2013 c1 
1Isa Furukado
This is great and all, but shouldn't you have just gotten an FF account and posted it there? You know, since it's a fanfic and all.
1Isa FurukadoThis is great and all, but shouldn't you have just gotten an FF account and posted it there? You know, since it's a fanfic and all.
10/30/2012 c30 onemore-brokendreamer
Please just make them have a happy fairy tale ending, I can't take this
Please just make them have a happy fairy tale ending, I can't take this
10/30/2012 c20 onemore-brokendreamer
I can't deal with this asdfghjkl sorry you're just a really good writer
I can't deal with this asdfghjkl sorry you're just a really good writer
10/30/2012 c1 onemore-brokendreamer
This sounds like its going to be quite weird... Which, of course, is why I'm so excited to read it
This sounds like its going to be quite weird... Which, of course, is why I'm so excited to read it
9/8/2012 c38 jennielove
I absolutely loved the story! It was really good. Though I didn't like the ending much bt it was really awesome ... I hope you keep writing more stories :)
I absolutely loved the story! It was really good. Though I didn't like the ending much bt it was really awesome ... I hope you keep writing more stories :)
9/6/2012 c21 Marita
Heads up, it's a 7 1/2 hour flight from Ireland to the East Coast. He would have had to have done a layover at Newark Airport and then been on a place for another 3 hours.
The story is cute but you may want to consider coming back to it and asking someone to read it over and fix what needs to be fixed, like a beta.
Good job though!
Heads up, it's a 7 1/2 hour flight from Ireland to the East Coast. He would have had to have done a layover at Newark Airport and then been on a place for another 3 hours.
The story is cute but you may want to consider coming back to it and asking someone to read it over and fix what needs to be fixed, like a beta.
Good job though!
9/3/2012 c1 Olivia
I'd like to take this opportunity to inform not only you but some of your reviewers as well. No, this fiction doesn't belong on this web site, but neither does it belong on FanFiction either (so PLEASE people, stop saying to post this on FanFiction). FictionPress nor FanFiction allow real person fictions, as the rules for both sites are the same. There are however, fanfiction sites that are specifically for One Direction fictions, there's three that will show up after you Google "One Direction fanfiction". I wish you One Direction writers would all just band together and post on those sites, everybody would be happy and better off now and in the long run.
I'd like to take this opportunity to inform not only you but some of your reviewers as well. No, this fiction doesn't belong on this web site, but neither does it belong on FanFiction either (so PLEASE people, stop saying to post this on FanFiction). FictionPress nor FanFiction allow real person fictions, as the rules for both sites are the same. There are however, fanfiction sites that are specifically for One Direction fictions, there's three that will show up after you Google "One Direction fanfiction". I wish you One Direction writers would all just band together and post on those sites, everybody would be happy and better off now and in the long run.