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1/19/2013 c28 True Talker
If this would be for me. TRUST ME when I say that I wouldn't want you to leave. Why? Because FOR REAL I want you in my life. Why wouldn't I?
9/9/2012 c20 True Talker
Sweet and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.
8/28/2012 c19 277electrical moon
Really lovely work. You have a truly unique style :)
7/24/2012 c17 True Talker
I am a bit confused by this? What do I mean by this I myself have a situation that I would be HAPPY to leave however what do you do when you don't have the money to leave and you owe so much that you currently can't even afford to live on your own TRUST ME. Also TRUST that I DON'T like the situation that I have put myself in. I would LOVE to be able to move out and go to a different city I would LOVE to. SERIOUSLY.

I have NO problem with leaving where I am currently living it "IS" the fact that I DON'T have the money to do so. When you owe money they DON'T care if you have pets to feed and a roof to put over your head SERIOUSLY.
7/12/2012 c1 2FixitfelixJRJRJR
I read this because of the description.

The actual poem was different than I assumed, but still had the sad aesthetic that I expected. Rose and the Doctor didn't end well... I enjoyed the including of Game of Thrones, but it seems random...

Very nice ending. Good repetition.
6/23/2012 c12 277electrical moon
Lovely poem :)
6/12/2012 c11 electrical moon
You've found an awesome guy :). I don't think you've lost the ability to write. I think it's a really great poem!
6/11/2012 c10 6anachronistic
yes! gosh, this is gorgeous and romantic and lovely and maybe quiet (the really. nice kind of quiet where you're in a bookstore surrounded by all your favorites or maybe like surrounded by the sea in the morning)! and i love your writing style; it's so subtle and almost understated but in a thoughtful way

anyway yeah also digging the doctor who reference. that's what brought me here. i'm guessing this is real life experience, like haha basically the point of a pillowbook from what i've seen so ummm i'm really happy for you even though i don't know you really!
6/3/2012 c9 105a theoretic revolution
glad you're happy he sounds lovely :)
6/3/2012 c8 277electrical moon
Somehow I missed this one. I love this! Really beautiful :)
6/3/2012 c9 electrical moon
It doesn't matter that it's not poetry. I'm glad you're happy :)
6/3/2012 c9 Ink Kisses
I don't care that it's not poetry, I'm just really happy for you right now. I won't pretend to know your story,but from your poetry you seem to have gone through a lot, and I'm really happy that you're happy. I love this collection, because it's so hopeful and happy. I don't really read happy poetry, but this is a very special collection. Long may the happiness last!
5/27/2012 c7 electrical moon
This is lovely! I love the idea of hands. Are you a flutist? If so, that's awesome. I am too :)
5/22/2012 c6 electrical moon
Lovely poem! I love the first stanza :)
5/20/2012 c5 35ink colored
Oh my God. This piece is stunning. Absolutely stunning. It's the kind of piece that makes me not just want to know the person its about, but the person who was observant enough to notice a tiny spot between two fingers.
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