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5/13/2012 c1 99Dreamers-Requiem
So, the whole good girl/bad boy thing...it's a cliche. It works, yeah, but still a cliche. And yet here, you manage to really breathe new life into it. The way this is written, it's fresh, interesting, and I really liked the lack of names. It gives it a different sort of feeling than if the reader knew their names. I loved the way you described the emotions and feelings behind everything, though I do think it was confusing when they moved from...whereever they were to the car. Perhaps just a slight indication of where they are beforehand and a mention of them moving to the car, maybe? Just a suggestion. I like how, in such a short space, we really learn a lot about these two characters. A brilliant one-shot. Great stuff.
5/3/2012 c1 3foreigndelight
It is a cliche, and it has many flaws..

But I am just hooked! from whatever, I dont know, but I think it is beautiful.

I can't believe there are not much reviews,it sure deserves more.

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