for The Heart Breaker Association9/10/2012 c25 stuck in bed
Yikes!
Although I did love the lines where he takes out her underwear and says that she's the "floozy". Got me laughing despite the quite serious and tense atmosphere.
I'm quite disappointed that there'll be no more Charleston for a while; they're my absolute favorite. However, I'm sure the next chapter will be good (like every chapter) despite their absence.
Yikes!
Although I did love the lines where he takes out her underwear and says that she's the "floozy". Got me laughing despite the quite serious and tense atmosphere.
I'm quite disappointed that there'll be no more Charleston for a while; they're my absolute favorite. However, I'm sure the next chapter will be good (like every chapter) despite their absence.
9/9/2012 c25 
4geeky-asian-ninja
Aww, poor Preston. But Charlie had to do that because it would be better for the two of them.
Hope that Charleston comes back soon!
4geeky-asian-ninjaAww, poor Preston. But Charlie had to do that because it would be better for the two of them.
Hope that Charleston comes back soon!
9/9/2012 c25 nicole7579
:(
Obviously this is setting up a big conflict between charlie and preston. Although I love the two of them together
:(
Obviously this is setting up a big conflict between charlie and preston. Although I love the two of them together
9/9/2012 c25 Interested
Cecilia is evil.
That's all I have to say.
Oh, and I gasped when I read the first paragraph.
Upload soon!
Cecilia is evil.
That's all I have to say.
Oh, and I gasped when I read the first paragraph.
Upload soon!
9/9/2012 c25 30Fate Rose
You know, you told me not to be fooled by the chapter title so I looked at it to see what it was and I realized that I normally don’t look at the chapter titles.
I’m exhausted, btw, so please forgive my typos. I expect there will be a number of them. (I’ve already fixed several.)
Anyways, onto the actual review. (Btw, I’m watching Friends, still.)
She’s hungover! That’s what’s wrong with her.
Even his bed is expensive. -.- Rich, white people, I swear!
NAKED PRESTON. Win. Just…yeah. Naked Preston. Yes. I’m so wonderful with words right now, huh?
You know, I’m still not sure if this story has a happy ending for Charlie and Preston. Sad face.
She’s just going to sneak out? That’s such a…guy thing to do.
…I literally just started falling asleep right now. Not good.
o.e She didn’t put on underwear? I…no. Just no. I can’t even… There are no circumstances where I have on clothes and no underwear.
For a moment there, I forgot what story this was and I was like, ‘Oh, is the cab driver Henry or Harry?’ (Those were their names, right? I don’t know. Am I making sense? One of them should have a cameo role at some point. That would be nifty.)
I read this sentence, ‘I silently cursed the person who evented alcohol,’ and I was like, ‘Whoops, that’s not what it says,’ so I reread it and then I was like, ‘Oh, hey, Sam was tired, too!’ because that is what it says. XD
I’m actually passing out in this chair. I really need to keep going so that I don’t pass out at the desk.
Tylenol best invention ever.
‘helped him cheat on me with myself’ How many women can say that sentence in their lifetime?
I still don’t trust Cecilia. I narrowed my eyes at the screen when I saw her name.
“How was it?” Lulz. That’s such a normal response. As if they were just two average best friends talking about an average drunken one night stand with an above average male.
He was amazing? Hot da-yum. So he’s hot and he’s good in bed and what was wrong with this boy again? Because he’s also funny and he has an awesome soft side. He seems pretty perfect to me.
I’m not even halfway done the scroll bar. I’m so tired and Friends is so distracting. Damn it.
Is it possible to break up a friendship? I’ve never done it before. Interesting… Although, I think you can break up with someone you’ve slept with so I guess it works.
For the longest time, I thought the phrase was actually, ‘For all intensive purposes,’ and I was so mind blown when I learned the truth.
Messy Preston sounds hot.
THIS IS WHY SHE SHOULD’VE PUT HER UNDERWEAR ON. Because, ew, gross, who doesn’t do that?
“I’m pretty sure it did.” I don’t think he’s any authority on that. After all, they were both super drunk. (Apparently a common occurrence with ASU students.)
‘He was not getting this.’ He’s pretty, not smart.
OHMYGOD, Preston needs a hug right this minute. If you were here, we’d go. Yep.
Really now? Maggie already knows about it? What a concept!
She just broke up with her friend. TEACH ME HOW TO DO THIS, CHARLIE.
D: He had an answer! Hugs, hugs, hugs. All the hugs for Preston!
Sad Preston makes a sad me! D: HE NEEDS A HUG.
I know how Charlie feels. Hugs for her, too! Though Preston is definitely the hug priority.
I did enjoy the long chapter!
No more Charleston is not cool. Survivable, but sad. So sad.
I love this chapter.
…I don’t think I’ve ever been so happy to finish reading a chapter. Bed time now. Kthx.
Oh, yeah, update something sometime soon. See you later!
30Fate RoseYou know, you told me not to be fooled by the chapter title so I looked at it to see what it was and I realized that I normally don’t look at the chapter titles.
I’m exhausted, btw, so please forgive my typos. I expect there will be a number of them. (I’ve already fixed several.)
Anyways, onto the actual review. (Btw, I’m watching Friends, still.)
She’s hungover! That’s what’s wrong with her.
Even his bed is expensive. -.- Rich, white people, I swear!
NAKED PRESTON. Win. Just…yeah. Naked Preston. Yes. I’m so wonderful with words right now, huh?
You know, I’m still not sure if this story has a happy ending for Charlie and Preston. Sad face.
She’s just going to sneak out? That’s such a…guy thing to do.
…I literally just started falling asleep right now. Not good.
o.e She didn’t put on underwear? I…no. Just no. I can’t even… There are no circumstances where I have on clothes and no underwear.
For a moment there, I forgot what story this was and I was like, ‘Oh, is the cab driver Henry or Harry?’ (Those were their names, right? I don’t know. Am I making sense? One of them should have a cameo role at some point. That would be nifty.)
I read this sentence, ‘I silently cursed the person who evented alcohol,’ and I was like, ‘Whoops, that’s not what it says,’ so I reread it and then I was like, ‘Oh, hey, Sam was tired, too!’ because that is what it says. XD
I’m actually passing out in this chair. I really need to keep going so that I don’t pass out at the desk.
Tylenol best invention ever.
‘helped him cheat on me with myself’ How many women can say that sentence in their lifetime?
I still don’t trust Cecilia. I narrowed my eyes at the screen when I saw her name.
“How was it?” Lulz. That’s such a normal response. As if they were just two average best friends talking about an average drunken one night stand with an above average male.
He was amazing? Hot da-yum. So he’s hot and he’s good in bed and what was wrong with this boy again? Because he’s also funny and he has an awesome soft side. He seems pretty perfect to me.
I’m not even halfway done the scroll bar. I’m so tired and Friends is so distracting. Damn it.
Is it possible to break up a friendship? I’ve never done it before. Interesting… Although, I think you can break up with someone you’ve slept with so I guess it works.
For the longest time, I thought the phrase was actually, ‘For all intensive purposes,’ and I was so mind blown when I learned the truth.
Messy Preston sounds hot.
THIS IS WHY SHE SHOULD’VE PUT HER UNDERWEAR ON. Because, ew, gross, who doesn’t do that?
“I’m pretty sure it did.” I don’t think he’s any authority on that. After all, they were both super drunk. (Apparently a common occurrence with ASU students.)
‘He was not getting this.’ He’s pretty, not smart.
OHMYGOD, Preston needs a hug right this minute. If you were here, we’d go. Yep.
Really now? Maggie already knows about it? What a concept!
She just broke up with her friend. TEACH ME HOW TO DO THIS, CHARLIE.
D: He had an answer! Hugs, hugs, hugs. All the hugs for Preston!
Sad Preston makes a sad me! D: HE NEEDS A HUG.
I know how Charlie feels. Hugs for her, too! Though Preston is definitely the hug priority.
I did enjoy the long chapter!
No more Charleston is not cool. Survivable, but sad. So sad.
I love this chapter.
…I don’t think I’ve ever been so happy to finish reading a chapter. Bed time now. Kthx.
Oh, yeah, update something sometime soon. See you later!
9/8/2012 c1 Anabeth
That was such a good chapter! OMG Charlie and Preston! *squeals* i wonder what will happen to their relationship now! However ... hmm i wonder if Jane and Preston are actually working together. Maybe he already knows that Maggie and Charlie are the same person. lols. I'm probably wrong anyway. Can't wait for your next chapter!
That was such a good chapter! OMG Charlie and Preston! *squeals* i wonder what will happen to their relationship now! However ... hmm i wonder if Jane and Preston are actually working together. Maybe he already knows that Maggie and Charlie are the same person. lols. I'm probably wrong anyway. Can't wait for your next chapter!
9/4/2012 c24 stuck in bed
Wow...
Haha, honestly that's all I can say because - because, well, I am definitely worried about Charlie spilling the secret as she's a bit drunk. And what about Preston? What's with all that flirting if he's happy to get back with Maggie?
Uggggh. So many questions!
Wow...
Haha, honestly that's all I can say because - because, well, I am definitely worried about Charlie spilling the secret as she's a bit drunk. And what about Preston? What's with all that flirting if he's happy to get back with Maggie?
Uggggh. So many questions!
9/3/2012 c24 Princess97
Yay! Will be awkward when they get out of their drunken stupor though. He's really going to start to mess with her brain now.
Yay! Will be awkward when they get out of their drunken stupor though. He's really going to start to mess with her brain now.
9/2/2012 c24 Guest
Wonder, wonder, wonderful
Drakron
Wonder, wonder, wonderful
Drakron
9/2/2012 c24 Guest D
OH MY GOSH! This story is amazing! I stayed up all night until three in the morning just to read the story because it is so freaking amazing! Gosh, haha and that last chapter! Yes! I love, love, LOVE Charleston! They are adorable! :D Haha, you know, I was reading this story and I was like, I hate Maggie, she is stealing Preston away from Charlie! But, then I realized Maggie was Charlie. O.o I absolutely adore Preston's and Charlie's relationship, it is so love/hate and they are freaking hilarious together! XD Anyway, enough about Charleston...okay, so Jane freaks me out. Like a lot. I feel like she's hiding something and she's working with Preston to bring the HBA down or something crazy like that! Haha, but she is definitely shady! :P OH, and Cecilia! She is most definitely Brenda! Seriously, the ring (helloooo), the top secret case, and her ability to be super sneaky all the time! She is definitely Brenda! And, I know you think you fooled everyone by making up that inspection bit, but you did not fool me! See, she probably made-up the inspection knowing that Charlie wouldn't be able to come and then made that phone call to make it seem like she wasn't Brenda! But, I bet she DID call Charlie, just she was at the party and was Brenda! :D Haha, I know that didn't make any sense and I'm probably super wrong, but oh well, she is still shady too! Okay, that is all! And you better update super, super soon because I need to know what happens next! :D
OH MY GOSH! This story is amazing! I stayed up all night until three in the morning just to read the story because it is so freaking amazing! Gosh, haha and that last chapter! Yes! I love, love, LOVE Charleston! They are adorable! :D Haha, you know, I was reading this story and I was like, I hate Maggie, she is stealing Preston away from Charlie! But, then I realized Maggie was Charlie. O.o I absolutely adore Preston's and Charlie's relationship, it is so love/hate and they are freaking hilarious together! XD Anyway, enough about Charleston...okay, so Jane freaks me out. Like a lot. I feel like she's hiding something and she's working with Preston to bring the HBA down or something crazy like that! Haha, but she is definitely shady! :P OH, and Cecilia! She is most definitely Brenda! Seriously, the ring (helloooo), the top secret case, and her ability to be super sneaky all the time! She is definitely Brenda! And, I know you think you fooled everyone by making up that inspection bit, but you did not fool me! See, she probably made-up the inspection knowing that Charlie wouldn't be able to come and then made that phone call to make it seem like she wasn't Brenda! But, I bet she DID call Charlie, just she was at the party and was Brenda! :D Haha, I know that didn't make any sense and I'm probably super wrong, but oh well, she is still shady too! Okay, that is all! And you better update super, super soon because I need to know what happens next! :D
9/2/2012 c24 MissFrizz37
Ahhhhhh! Little does Preston know that Maggie and Charlie are the same person! I can't wait until the next chapter. I know Charlie's going to slip-up.
Ahhhhhh! Little does Preston know that Maggie and Charlie are the same person! I can't wait until the next chapter. I know Charlie's going to slip-up.
9/2/2012 c24 Guest
OH GOSH. There are no words! Squeal :)
OH GOSH. There are no words! Squeal :)
9/1/2012 c24 Fate Rose
She hasn’t read the ring article. I feel like this is important. Not sure why.
I still do not trust Brenda. (Also, I apparently have reached the ‘so tired I cannot type’ portion of the night so please excuse any and all typos.)
PRESTON! The ‘some idiot’ is Preston, right? Right?! :D?
I would cave for the goofy grin. But I’m terrible. There are a handful of people that could get me to do just about anything. (Thank ‘the Jesus’ as Denise would say, that they don’t know who they are.)
D’aww. They’re friends!
“God damnit” reminded me of “God damn the world!”
Oh! Oh! :D We get to see them drunk! This sounds fun! Aaaah!
Holy crap, I am tired. My brain changed a lot of the words in the last sentence to things completely different. Like…whoa….
It makes me think he’s like a little kid, spinning around in his chair. XD
Guys don’t even like to talk about being kicked in the balls/another guy being kicked there. It’s kinda funny.
I miss the lack of clothing. Can we do that again? Yes. Let’s do that again. Shirtless Preston was awesome.
OHMYGOD. Does Jess read this? Because that period rant…just ohmygod. That’s hilarious.
Somehow the fact that it was a case doesn’t surprise me. But that’s kind of sad.
Never having a boyfriend to have a boyfriend? That’s weird. Not for Charlie, I guess, but still weird. And sad.
“You went bruising cruising?” …what? What the hell did Preston just say? Where did you even get that? Like…what?
Apparently, he’s been trying to date crazy cat ladies.
D: PRESTON NEEDS A HUG RIGHT THIS MINUTE. Let’s go on an adventure and find Preston (he goes here, right? We can find him). Adventure. I’d be up for it. Preston’s an attractive guy. (Plot twist: the writer and her roommate meet the character on campus and it’s awesome.)
…I don’t know if I’m going to like the end of this chapter…
I noticed her slip up of mentioning his mother!
Ahahahahahahahahaha. He deserves to be kicked in the balls.
WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED? HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT THERE. THIS IS NOT OKAY. WHAT IS THIS SHIT? YOU ARE A JERK. A SAM-JERK. A TOTAL SAM-JERK. Ahem…
I loved this chapter until we got to the stupid end, you jerk.
D: Damn it. No more regular updates and you leave it with this?! Gaaaaah. You suck. Jerk.
She hasn’t read the ring article. I feel like this is important. Not sure why.
I still do not trust Brenda. (Also, I apparently have reached the ‘so tired I cannot type’ portion of the night so please excuse any and all typos.)
PRESTON! The ‘some idiot’ is Preston, right? Right?! :D?
I would cave for the goofy grin. But I’m terrible. There are a handful of people that could get me to do just about anything. (Thank ‘the Jesus’ as Denise would say, that they don’t know who they are.)
D’aww. They’re friends!
“God damnit” reminded me of “God damn the world!”
Oh! Oh! :D We get to see them drunk! This sounds fun! Aaaah!
Holy crap, I am tired. My brain changed a lot of the words in the last sentence to things completely different. Like…whoa….
It makes me think he’s like a little kid, spinning around in his chair. XD
Guys don’t even like to talk about being kicked in the balls/another guy being kicked there. It’s kinda funny.
I miss the lack of clothing. Can we do that again? Yes. Let’s do that again. Shirtless Preston was awesome.
OHMYGOD. Does Jess read this? Because that period rant…just ohmygod. That’s hilarious.
Somehow the fact that it was a case doesn’t surprise me. But that’s kind of sad.
Never having a boyfriend to have a boyfriend? That’s weird. Not for Charlie, I guess, but still weird. And sad.
“You went bruising cruising?” …what? What the hell did Preston just say? Where did you even get that? Like…what?
Apparently, he’s been trying to date crazy cat ladies.
D: PRESTON NEEDS A HUG RIGHT THIS MINUTE. Let’s go on an adventure and find Preston (he goes here, right? We can find him). Adventure. I’d be up for it. Preston’s an attractive guy. (Plot twist: the writer and her roommate meet the character on campus and it’s awesome.)
…I don’t know if I’m going to like the end of this chapter…
I noticed her slip up of mentioning his mother!
Ahahahahahahahahaha. He deserves to be kicked in the balls.
WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED? HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT THERE. THIS IS NOT OKAY. WHAT IS THIS SHIT? YOU ARE A JERK. A SAM-JERK. A TOTAL SAM-JERK. Ahem…
I loved this chapter until we got to the stupid end, you jerk.
D: Damn it. No more regular updates and you leave it with this?! Gaaaaah. You suck. Jerk.
9/1/2012 c24 4courtnestle
i really like charlie and preston together, only because maggie isnt a real person! im interested to see where they go from here; if they end up together and preston catches her out.. i dunno. in love with this story!
4courtnestlei really like charlie and preston together, only because maggie isnt a real person! im interested to see where they go from here; if they end up together and preston catches her out.. i dunno. in love with this story!
9/1/2012 c24 1surrendertomusic
OMG GETTING PERSONAL YAY
Holy crapsicles though the ending aoielsdkfjsadijgk OH MY GOODNESS! My feelings are everywhere
1surrendertomusicOMG GETTING PERSONAL YAY
Holy crapsicles though the ending aoielsdkfjsadijgk OH MY GOODNESS! My feelings are everywhere