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10/24/2013 c16 EmeraldStorm7
I'm happy that you got that off your chest, you'll soon learn that everything happens for a reason. Some people are just supposed to be guest stars in your life, don't worry, your starring role I am sure is on your horizon, you can't rush it :)
10/24/2013 c15 EmeraldStorm7
Ohhh! Back and forth hey... ahh I guess that's life. Well written chapter
10/24/2013 c14 EmeraldStorm7
Well that surely was a big turn of events, but good for you!
10/24/2013 c13 EmeraldStorm7
:) Beautiful
10/24/2013 c12 EmeraldStorm7
OH YAY! This chapter was your best yet!
10/24/2013 c11 EmeraldStorm7
I'm curious as to what was so embarrassing? I do like ten horrifically embarrassing things a day so don't feel too bad haha
10/24/2013 c10 EmeraldStorm7
It's amazing how those little moments can just make your day
10/24/2013 c9 EmeraldStorm7
OHHHH those few words spoke volumes, last two lines! WOW !
10/24/2013 c8 EmeraldStorm7
Did you really write a song! Wow! I hope he is deserving of such a gift!
10/24/2013 c7 EmeraldStorm7
This reminded me of when my bf and I first started dating :) Watching him laugh is the best! This was super sweet
10/24/2013 c6 EmeraldStorm7
Jeez that was beautiful... I loved how you built him up in the beginning just to break him down in the end. I'm sorry you had to go through this... no girl should feel that way!
10/24/2013 c5 EmeraldStorm7
:) I loved this, the repeated use of the word yesterday made me think of the Beatles and I love the Beatles. Also I felt like it was a big movie moment, I could see the whole thing, very well described
10/24/2013 c4 EmeraldStorm7
The poetic flow is sound, you tell the story well in prose... the contents however was quite heartbreaking... dreams like that is just unsettling and I'm sorry if you were really dreaming that...?
10/24/2013 c3 EmeraldStorm7
Don't ever feel you're pathetic! The thoughts we have when we're kids are not supposed to be the opinions that remain with us as teens (and adults), so don't feel ashamed of being the girl that fell in love, be proud that you were the girl brave enough to do so in the first place
10/24/2013 c2 EmeraldStorm7
Love the use of then and now, showed your progress!
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