for Betrayal5/5/2012 c1 
16Shauni Cooper
This was good. I liked it a lot and thought you put a lot of yourself into it; that is very perceivable in my opinion. Very well done. Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni
16Shauni CooperThis was good. I liked it a lot and thought you put a lot of yourself into it; that is very perceivable in my opinion. Very well done. Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni