for The Alphabetic System2/1/2013 c11 Guest
When are u going to review again it's been months ! Great stOry Plz update soon!
When are u going to review again it's been months ! Great stOry Plz update soon!
11/18/2012 c11 
2renegade01
i do love getting updates for this ;)
"No, that felt really, really good. Let's do it again." - favourite line right there
ending was cute. erm...how is cameron changing gears if he's holding jessica's hand? or is he driving an automatic?
2renegade01i do love getting updates for this ;)
"No, that felt really, really good. Let's do it again." - favourite line right there
ending was cute. erm...how is cameron changing gears if he's holding jessica's hand? or is he driving an automatic?
11/18/2012 c11 DreamExplicitly
Update! Yayy I've been waiting for this, such a cute ending! Love them together, I really can't wait to see what develops from this.
Update! Yayy I've been waiting for this, such a cute ending! Love them together, I really can't wait to see what develops from this.
11/18/2012 c11 1funnechick
Well, it was interesting to see just how embarrassed Jessica was admitting her crush, especially when she already knew how Cameron felt about her. I wonder if Leah would ever call off the engagement because of her feelings for Dexter...and what would her and Cameron's mothers do in response?
1funnechickWell, it was interesting to see just how embarrassed Jessica was admitting her crush, especially when she already knew how Cameron felt about her. I wonder if Leah would ever call off the engagement because of her feelings for Dexter...and what would her and Cameron's mothers do in response?
11/18/2012 c11 Guest
Great chapter wow they are really honest to each other but won't it be a little awkward now between Cameron and Jessica now but anyway I wonder what's happening with Leah and dex great chap though ammmaaaaazzzinggg update soon!
Great chapter wow they are really honest to each other but won't it be a little awkward now between Cameron and Jessica now but anyway I wonder what's happening with Leah and dex great chap though ammmaaaaazzzinggg update soon!
11/17/2012 c11 10Nami98
Son of a bitch! Always at the good parts! Damn you and your awesome ass writing.
Hahaah, just to start off, I love you. You made the PERFECT-est story EVER, and YES I am aware that "perfect-est" is not a word. I mean, this is AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING-bro, you don't even KNOW it.
I literally forgot that I was a human being as I read this story, like I was just THERE observing it all, its outstanding! I wish my writing was like that! Not only that, but the humor and story line and the realness you added to the story was refreshing. I am legit in love with this story and the characters (not really Karen and Leah) but I still genuinely feel really bad for Leah...she's still very in love with Dexter, and he doesnt feel the same :( I mean he MIGHT because of the plan, but...i dunno, we'll just have to see. And that line Jessica said, "Jessica leaned back and looked at me with irritated eyes. "No, that felt really, really good. Let's do it again.""
Oh my God, I died laughing.
Please update soon, I am really looking forward to more! :D
10Nami98Son of a bitch! Always at the good parts! Damn you and your awesome ass writing.
Hahaah, just to start off, I love you. You made the PERFECT-est story EVER, and YES I am aware that "perfect-est" is not a word. I mean, this is AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING-bro, you don't even KNOW it.
I literally forgot that I was a human being as I read this story, like I was just THERE observing it all, its outstanding! I wish my writing was like that! Not only that, but the humor and story line and the realness you added to the story was refreshing. I am legit in love with this story and the characters (not really Karen and Leah) but I still genuinely feel really bad for Leah...she's still very in love with Dexter, and he doesnt feel the same :( I mean he MIGHT because of the plan, but...i dunno, we'll just have to see. And that line Jessica said, "Jessica leaned back and looked at me with irritated eyes. "No, that felt really, really good. Let's do it again.""
Oh my God, I died laughing.
Please update soon, I am really looking forward to more! :D
11/17/2012 c11 VoidVoidable
I'm soooooooo happy! Love how this chapter turned out and don't worry, the time it takes for you to update is totally made-up by your awesome updates!
I'm soooooooo happy! Love how this chapter turned out and don't worry, the time it takes for you to update is totally made-up by your awesome updates!