for Blink, Blink at Me, Damsel8/30/2012 c1 
60AppleCrumble
Beautiful piece created with detailed metaphors and a structure that carries the reader through the poem. Nice job. Keep Writing!
60AppleCrumbleBeautiful piece created with detailed metaphors and a structure that carries the reader through the poem. Nice job. Keep Writing!
5/16/2012 c1 14Self-DissectedPsyche
I see lot of common romantic metaphors which have had new life breathed into them by your wording. You mentioned that English is not your first language, but you've managed a brilliant command of its mechanics. This poem in particular is Shakespearean to me, and holds the same mature, thought out romanticism. While the whole poem speaks of an all encompassing love, the final stanza brings it all back down to earth, back to her, and brilliantly accents the damsel with worship and loyalty. Lovely.
14Self-DissectedPsycheI see lot of common romantic metaphors which have had new life breathed into them by your wording. You mentioned that English is not your first language, but you've managed a brilliant command of its mechanics. This poem in particular is Shakespearean to me, and holds the same mature, thought out romanticism. While the whole poem speaks of an all encompassing love, the final stanza brings it all back down to earth, back to her, and brilliantly accents the damsel with worship and loyalty. Lovely.
5/7/2012 c1 thisaccountisclosedthanksbye
Really lovely poem. For some reason I really loved the line 'How tall is that ladder that leads to your dreams'.
Really lovely poem. For some reason I really loved the line 'How tall is that ladder that leads to your dreams'.
5/7/2012 c1 True Talker
Wow, that is amazing and I am blown away. Thank you so very truly much for sharing this.
Wow, that is amazing and I am blown away. Thank you so very truly much for sharing this.