for The Worst Critic7/7/2012 c1 
50The Moon Howls At The Wolf
Wow intense emotion expressed, not to say that I havnt felt the same way multiple times! I love the way you keep rewriting slightly differently "you critic" for it almost feels as if your revising the workas you go along. Great poem, intense immagery of a man with a haughty look crossing through lines that don't suit his fancy.
Keep Writing!
50The Moon Howls At The WolfWow intense emotion expressed, not to say that I havnt felt the same way multiple times! I love the way you keep rewriting slightly differently "you critic" for it almost feels as if your revising the workas you go along. Great poem, intense immagery of a man with a haughty look crossing through lines that don't suit his fancy.
Keep Writing!
6/16/2012 c1 3Raisa Youngblood
I love this poem. I read it in my head, so I may be wrong, but it sounded like it had nice rythem. (I feel like I murdered that word. :/)
Anyway, I also like that you got more than just a few lines out. I tend to only get four, then curl up and die.
This peom really speaks to the critic in me. :)
3Raisa YoungbloodI love this poem. I read it in my head, so I may be wrong, but it sounded like it had nice rythem. (I feel like I murdered that word. :/)
Anyway, I also like that you got more than just a few lines out. I tend to only get four, then curl up and die.
This peom really speaks to the critic in me. :)
6/8/2012 c1 8ThatBlackMage
Wow, that's the most accurate description I've seen of the writing process. Not that I'm an expert, but still, this one hits home.
8ThatBlackMageWow, that's the most accurate description I've seen of the writing process. Not that I'm an expert, but still, this one hits home.
5/17/2012 c1 Abbytjie
Amazing. So good and so true. Every writer is their own worst critic, and I love how you put it and describe it. Really amazing poetry.
Amazing. So good and so true. Every writer is their own worst critic, and I love how you put it and describe it. Really amazing poetry.
5/11/2012 c1 76The Autumn Queen
Amazingly written. The jerky flow works quite well in fact, especially the hybrid you've wrought with the rhyming section in between. It's difficult to get such a balance, but you've done it extremely well. The only thing I can point out is, in your first stanza: "And you rut,/ And for what?" - I think that last "and" is a little redundant. I'd put an ellipses or a hyphen after the "rut" and then just have "For what?" as the following line. "and" takes a little sliver of focus away.
It's funny. I normally say nicely written, but this deserves better than that.
Also, another thing: "To damn and condemn," - do you need a comma there?
Sums up the whole "everyone's their own worst critic" quite nicely. Looking forward to more work from you...and back too.
76The Autumn QueenAmazingly written. The jerky flow works quite well in fact, especially the hybrid you've wrought with the rhyming section in between. It's difficult to get such a balance, but you've done it extremely well. The only thing I can point out is, in your first stanza: "And you rut,/ And for what?" - I think that last "and" is a little redundant. I'd put an ellipses or a hyphen after the "rut" and then just have "For what?" as the following line. "and" takes a little sliver of focus away.
It's funny. I normally say nicely written, but this deserves better than that.
Also, another thing: "To damn and condemn," - do you need a comma there?
Sums up the whole "everyone's their own worst critic" quite nicely. Looking forward to more work from you...and back too.
5/10/2012 c1 3B.A. Howard
I really liked this, different from a lot of the stuff I see on here. Nice work
3B.A. HowardI really liked this, different from a lot of the stuff I see on here. Nice work