for That Two Faced Bastard7/25/2014 c1 Guest
Please update ! All your stories are great but unfinished ! Too bad :(
Please update ! All your stories are great but unfinished ! Too bad :(
5/11/2014 c3 
6Carmel March
This is so good and so interesting, and you're right, I'm a little confused but I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see where you take this story!
6Carmel MarchThis is so good and so interesting, and you're right, I'm a little confused but I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see where you take this story!
4/6/2014 c3 1Drama-Geek-1662
I liked this, I felt like it brought depth to the characters and I like this mystery at the end. Please update soon :)
1Drama-Geek-1662I liked this, I felt like it brought depth to the characters and I like this mystery at the end. Please update soon :)
4/6/2014 c3 The red archer
New chapter please with a side of ice cream
New chapter please with a side of ice cream
2/18/2014 c2 1Drama-Geek-1662
I like the shortness it makes you want to know more, very good start :)
1Drama-Geek-1662I like the shortness it makes you want to know more, very good start :)
6/19/2013 c1 Cupcakedream33
This story was great! And she was really courageous. Is this going to be a oneshot or are you going to continue?
This story was great! And she was really courageous. Is this going to be a oneshot or are you going to continue?
12/3/2012 c1 nicolerosabel
this is a pretty good start but are you going to finish it? I'd love to read more of this :)
this is a pretty good start but are you going to finish it? I'd love to read more of this :)
11/18/2012 c1 16Amber Akasha
Wow!
I love it, hope I can see the two of them interacting some more and figure out why he was such a bastard... I love how she stands up and hits him where it hurts.
Feel like there should be a quiet round of clapping after that :)
16Amber AkashaWow!
I love it, hope I can see the two of them interacting some more and figure out why he was such a bastard... I love how she stands up and hits him where it hurts.
Feel like there should be a quiet round of clapping after that :)
11/17/2012 c1 2Sincerely Claude
You mean to tell me you wrote this story six months ago and you STILL have not added a chapter? Guuuurl, that ain't right. Get to work. This prologue was intense. Why did her best friend suddenly turn on her? What is up with his dad? Can't say I like the name Orlando though. Does he get a nickname? Orlando... P
Y U no write more, homes? Chop chop:D
2Sincerely ClaudeYou mean to tell me you wrote this story six months ago and you STILL have not added a chapter? Guuuurl, that ain't right. Get to work. This prologue was intense. Why did her best friend suddenly turn on her? What is up with his dad? Can't say I like the name Orlando though. Does he get a nickname? Orlando... P
Y U no write more, homes? Chop chop:D