for Silence7/30/2012 c1 
23Love A Mysterious Thing
This is another really really well written piece. I especially connected with it with a good friend of mine. Amazing and beautiful. You really do have a way with words. Great write!
23Love A Mysterious ThingThis is another really really well written piece. I especially connected with it with a good friend of mine. Amazing and beautiful. You really do have a way with words. Great write!
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
So, so, so, SO true. I have someone that I say this in mind to all the time. When they look at you and don't say anything it BREAKS you. Anything, even screaming, would be better than the silence... Great job. It really makes me think about my own personal experiences, and that's super good in poems!
112Stonehartdreamer27So, so, so, SO true. I have someone that I say this in mind to all the time. When they look at you and don't say anything it BREAKS you. Anything, even screaming, would be better than the silence... Great job. It really makes me think about my own personal experiences, and that's super good in poems!
5/13/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
AMAZING! I LOVED IT SOOOO MUCHHHH! I can actually relate to this poem, as its now happening in my life. The flow, the passion, it was all so wonderlful! Truly genious, keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraAMAZING! I LOVED IT SOOOO MUCHHHH! I can actually relate to this poem, as its now happening in my life. The flow, the passion, it was all so wonderlful! Truly genious, keep it up .
5/13/2012 c1 15katrrat
intense feelings! intense feelings! Oh, you have an original way of writing. This is partly sad but, oh dear, wonderful! I can picture your thoughts and feel them. That's what real poetry must achieve!
15katrratintense feelings! intense feelings! Oh, you have an original way of writing. This is partly sad but, oh dear, wonderful! I can picture your thoughts and feel them. That's what real poetry must achieve!
5/12/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Sorry I didn't review this earlier.
Okay, that was vary... beautiful. It had a nice flow, and I loved it, and the story behind it.
16Meadow FrostSorry I didn't review this earlier.
Okay, that was vary... beautiful. It had a nice flow, and I loved it, and the story behind it.
5/12/2012 c1 John 8.36
Beautifully writtenalmost melodic! You write freely and meaningfully! Keep it up, Miss Shauni!
Beautifully writtenalmost melodic! You write freely and meaningfully! Keep it up, Miss Shauni!