for Cage1/7/2013 c1 
49SkinnyLove203
Very sweet. Delicately encapsulates the meaning behind true love, I feel.
49SkinnyLove203Very sweet. Delicately encapsulates the meaning behind true love, I feel.
7/30/2012 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
Very, very nice. It was positive and that alone is refreshing to read. Everything seems to be so negative now a days, it's great to see someone hanging on to a spark of happiness. Love it.
23Love A Mysterious ThingVery, very nice. It was positive and that alone is refreshing to read. Everything seems to be so negative now a days, it's great to see someone hanging on to a spark of happiness. Love it.
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
I love this! The wording is beautiful and the overall structure of the poem is wonderful. Good job! Keep up the good work!
112Stonehartdreamer27I love this! The wording is beautiful and the overall structure of the poem is wonderful. Good job! Keep up the good work!
7/17/2012 c1 19IHeartWritingSoThere
A great piece, something I can relate too. Very well worded, with a lot of meaning. It literly gave me shivers. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poems, it means a lot.
Sincerly,
19IHeartWritingSoThereA great piece, something I can relate too. Very well worded, with a lot of meaning. It literly gave me shivers. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poems, it means a lot.
Sincerly,
6/12/2012 c1 60AppleCrumble
I really loved this. The imagery was perfect you painted it beautifully! Loved it, great piece!
60AppleCrumbleI really loved this. The imagery was perfect you painted it beautifully! Loved it, great piece!
5/17/2012 c1 3CrimsonPrincess123
I think this may sound a little weird but for some reason I feel this poem should be sadder. I mean the person who was speaking in the poem was saying how hurt they were, but suddenly someone comes along and now their better again? To me I just feel that if their heart could be fixed up so easily they were not as hurt as they thought they were. And again this may sound weird but I was a little disappointed in the character.
3CrimsonPrincess123I think this may sound a little weird but for some reason I feel this poem should be sadder. I mean the person who was speaking in the poem was saying how hurt they were, but suddenly someone comes along and now their better again? To me I just feel that if their heart could be fixed up so easily they were not as hurt as they thought they were. And again this may sound weird but I was a little disappointed in the character.
5/17/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
I LOVEEEEEEE THIS POEMMMMM! I can relate to it soooo much! The descriptions? Oh my Jesus! They were wonderfullllllllll. This was beyond breathtaking and I applaud this soooo much. Please, keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraI LOVEEEEEEE THIS POEMMMMM! I can relate to it soooo much! The descriptions? Oh my Jesus! They were wonderfullllllllll. This was beyond breathtaking and I applaud this soooo much. Please, keep it up .
5/14/2012 c1 John 8.36
Shauni, this is amazing. I am really moved. To write this well, you have had to have a great deal of hard, emotional experiences and pain in your life at such a young age. Kudos to you for using all of that in this healthy, creative, artistic way!
Your friend,
Tiff
Shauni, this is amazing. I am really moved. To write this well, you have had to have a great deal of hard, emotional experiences and pain in your life at such a young age. Kudos to you for using all of that in this healthy, creative, artistic way!
Your friend,
Tiff
5/13/2012 c1 15katrrat
your poems always make me shiver. Your words are legendary ;O
I also love the special kind of structure on this! It also gives a monadic meaning to the poem. A brilliant piece! Always keep things rollin' :D
15katrratyour poems always make me shiver. Your words are legendary ;O
I also love the special kind of structure on this! It also gives a monadic meaning to the poem. A brilliant piece! Always keep things rollin' :D