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1/7/2013 c1 4Lolitroy
Haha, that was a nice piece of writing. I love how you had the time to write about your parents. And, well, I can't asy anything about the plot or story 'cuz that was your point, heh. So yay! I liked it.
1/3/2013 c1 10AlternatingCurrent
I think this has the beginnings of a good monologue. It definitely has potential to be expanded, and perhaps you could work in some symbolism with the differences between the male and female robins. Keep writing!
8/7/2012 c1 3Broken but Beautiful
Nice! Good job!
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5/22/2012 c1 36Miyano Ran
aww quite sad :/ her parents split cuz of many differences. but nice story! very nicely written:)

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