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24Pzychotic
Lol. You're weird!
Hahaha XD I like it this is awesomely positive and a boost to my day.
24PzychoticLol. You're weird!
Hahaha XD I like it this is awesomely positive and a boost to my day.
2/20/2013 c5 Pzychotic
Woah that's so cool how you narrated it omnisciently
It's cute too, like Noo's bunnies :P
Nice job! It's cool that your procrastination is productive. :P (I procrastinate by watching Pewds, Noo, Benja, and Jer)
Woah that's so cool how you narrated it omnisciently
It's cute too, like Noo's bunnies :P
Nice job! It's cool that your procrastination is productive. :P (I procrastinate by watching Pewds, Noo, Benja, and Jer)
8/22/2012 c4 da oaf 3
I do always wonder what I look like from someone else's life. very good. lawl. k. anyway.
WHOA SHE SAW HERSELF THROUGH FAYE'S EYES? WHOA HOW COOL I WISH I COULD DO THAT... wow you are going on your supernatural kick huh? well you were. since this was updated like a month ago... whatevs. moving onnnnnnnn
okay you did NOT just name the kid brody. did you do that on purpose. o.m.g. i can NOT believe you. this is totes gonna ruin EVERYTHANG.
OOH I LIKE IKE. MIKEA ND IKE. HAHAHAHAA ikes the guy whos gonna end up with her. CALLED IT.
OOH HES HELPING TO PAY FOR HER LUNCH. WHAT A GUY. I WISH SOMEONE WOULD HELP ME TO PAY FOR MY LUNCH...
hahaha she savors the food. she sounds like tina...
hahaa ike totes likes her. I CALLED IT DIDNT I. I CALLED IT.L MWAHAHAHAHA IM SO GOOD.
Rachel wiggled her eyebrows at me. "Ooh la la! Tell me everything tomorrow!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING WE WOULD SAY TO EACH TOHER
hahahaha how random is it that she found 35 cents... like where did that come from hhaahahaha. but oh man cory is very... teary. oh i forgot he paid for her lunch money wow me stupido. lawl
AWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOO CUTE
but i do agree a little bit about the underdeveloped thing. maybe if you had her acting a little more weird around cory in the beginning and feeling more relief when she was talking to ike or something. also the conversations a little much, i would put in more description when they're talking.
BUT OTHERWISE, MUCHO GUSTO. i dont even know what that means... BUT ME LIKE. VELLY MUCH.
AND BRODY WASNT BAD. BUT THE NAME WAS BAD. OKAY.
kthxbai
I do always wonder what I look like from someone else's life. very good. lawl. k. anyway.
WHOA SHE SAW HERSELF THROUGH FAYE'S EYES? WHOA HOW COOL I WISH I COULD DO THAT... wow you are going on your supernatural kick huh? well you were. since this was updated like a month ago... whatevs. moving onnnnnnnn
okay you did NOT just name the kid brody. did you do that on purpose. o.m.g. i can NOT believe you. this is totes gonna ruin EVERYTHANG.
OOH I LIKE IKE. MIKEA ND IKE. HAHAHAHAA ikes the guy whos gonna end up with her. CALLED IT.
OOH HES HELPING TO PAY FOR HER LUNCH. WHAT A GUY. I WISH SOMEONE WOULD HELP ME TO PAY FOR MY LUNCH...
hahaha she savors the food. she sounds like tina...
hahaa ike totes likes her. I CALLED IT DIDNT I. I CALLED IT.L MWAHAHAHAHA IM SO GOOD.
Rachel wiggled her eyebrows at me. "Ooh la la! Tell me everything tomorrow!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING WE WOULD SAY TO EACH TOHER
hahahaha how random is it that she found 35 cents... like where did that come from hhaahahaha. but oh man cory is very... teary. oh i forgot he paid for her lunch money wow me stupido. lawl
AWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOO CUTE
but i do agree a little bit about the underdeveloped thing. maybe if you had her acting a little more weird around cory in the beginning and feeling more relief when she was talking to ike or something. also the conversations a little much, i would put in more description when they're talking.
BUT OTHERWISE, MUCHO GUSTO. i dont even know what that means... BUT ME LIKE. VELLY MUCH.
AND BRODY WASNT BAD. BUT THE NAME WAS BAD. OKAY.
kthxbai
8/12/2012 c4 Pzychotic
Lol my favorite part was "balloons and dust bunnies" :)
Yeah anyways, this was really cool. I liked the surrealism-ish thing about her seeing herself from other peoples' eyes. Although I don't really understand how it didn't work for her over the past times she tried it. Oh and also why is she so confused all the time?
Haha if you included the headband that would be too Ike-like XD Lolol.
I would suggest that you indicated who is speaking; sometimes I got lost in a conversation n had to go back to read it.
All in all this was really cool. And it was really you. :P LOLOL. Great job!
Lol my favorite part was "balloons and dust bunnies" :)
Yeah anyways, this was really cool. I liked the surrealism-ish thing about her seeing herself from other peoples' eyes. Although I don't really understand how it didn't work for her over the past times she tried it. Oh and also why is she so confused all the time?
Haha if you included the headband that would be too Ike-like XD Lolol.
I would suggest that you indicated who is speaking; sometimes I got lost in a conversation n had to go back to read it.
All in all this was really cool. And it was really you. :P LOLOL. Great job!
8/1/2012 c3 Link's Bromance
OKAY DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT WAS FOR ME NOT TO PUNCH THE COMPUTER SCREEEN?
I was like on fire. Those people are unnaturally cruel! If I were her (IDK, I knew it was a girl all along) I would just beat them up (like Justin Bieber gets by his girlfriend's dad in some music video). Seriously sis? Why?
Okay besides that I was also really sad this didn't have a resolution! IDK if she ever gets better D: Usually you write such happy things D: What happened?
Well overally, it was really good and it was poignant :) I hope the next one isn't so ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGG XD Lol PS I'm not mad at your writing I'm just really mad at the things that happen to her
OKAY DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT WAS FOR ME NOT TO PUNCH THE COMPUTER SCREEEN?
I was like on fire. Those people are unnaturally cruel! If I were her (IDK, I knew it was a girl all along) I would just beat them up (like Justin Bieber gets by his girlfriend's dad in some music video). Seriously sis? Why?
Okay besides that I was also really sad this didn't have a resolution! IDK if she ever gets better D: Usually you write such happy things D: What happened?
Well overally, it was really good and it was poignant :) I hope the next one isn't so ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGG XD Lol PS I'm not mad at your writing I'm just really mad at the things that happen to her
7/14/2012 c1 3peacelovejay
OMG please please pleaassseeeee write a sequel to this! I mean, there was a little in "Call Me Maybe," but we need to see them get together. Please! :)
3peacelovejayOMG please please pleaassseeeee write a sequel to this! I mean, there was a little in "Call Me Maybe," but we need to see them get together. Please! :)
6/3/2012 c2 24Pzychotic
Yeah it was pretty darn good!
I'm glad that guy got his BOTTOM kicked. I mean, he's such an ARSE-head. Even worse than LYSANDER loving HELENA vs HERMIA. That was actually a real accident b/c PUCK screwed up.
Alright anyways, it was pretty cool how you fit the quotes together into one story :D Write more of these things - they are cool!
24PzychoticYeah it was pretty darn good!
I'm glad that guy got his BOTTOM kicked. I mean, he's such an ARSE-head. Even worse than LYSANDER loving HELENA vs HERMIA. That was actually a real accident b/c PUCK screwed up.
Alright anyways, it was pretty cool how you fit the quotes together into one story :D Write more of these things - they are cool!
5/28/2012 c2 2peanuts and paydays
DID YOU KNOW I HAD TO WAIT 10 MINUTES TO REVIEW...
WTF
anyway, there's not much to say about this, except that that guy is jack*** (i think fp would like suspend me or osmething bahahaha) and the girl is super cool at the end. LOVE HERRRR.
Also love how you didn't give them names.
GOOD JOB MON WRITE MORE KAY? KAY BYEEEEEEEEEE
2peanuts and paydaysDID YOU KNOW I HAD TO WAIT 10 MINUTES TO REVIEW...
WTF
anyway, there's not much to say about this, except that that guy is jack*** (i think fp would like suspend me or osmething bahahaha) and the girl is super cool at the end. LOVE HERRRR.
Also love how you didn't give them names.
GOOD JOB MON WRITE MORE KAY? KAY BYEEEEEEEEEE
5/28/2012 c1 peanuts and paydays
HEY YOU. LONG TIME NO REVIEW. BUT I'M EVEN REVIEWING TWICE SO WOOHOOO
omg. you put sigh again. -_- but whatevs. THe fact that she doesn't know the teacher's name is hilar. btdubs, how do you pronounce Charis...
AHAHA this Stefan guy sounds so monotone. I burst out laughing when he was all "I know." "Don't care."
by the way, love her room. like i said before. bahaha
WHY IS HER PHONE RINGTONE CALL ME MAYBE? HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
HAHAHAHA "I got TANGLED!" Man i Still need to watch that...
I like how Charis is loosely based on you. Not getting a boyfriend till college -_- WHen you TOTES COULD
Fave line: "How do you know? I find your strangeness endearing." BAHAHAHAH
Dude this girl totally sounds like you... "What's wrong with meeeeeee? WHy doesn't he wanna be friends with meeeee?" hahahaha 3
And how does this girl forget her own birthday... hhahahaaha what a loser ;)SPEAKING OF ITS ALMOST YOUR BIRTHDAY AHHHHHH
"When did you - how - what - Stefan! THIS LOOKS EXPENSIVE!" AHAHAHAHAHA
I don't even know if this was all suppsoed to make me laugh... maybe I'm weird but I think this is hilarious.
aw yayyyyy:) onto the next chapter
HEY YOU. LONG TIME NO REVIEW. BUT I'M EVEN REVIEWING TWICE SO WOOHOOO
omg. you put sigh again. -_- but whatevs. THe fact that she doesn't know the teacher's name is hilar. btdubs, how do you pronounce Charis...
AHAHA this Stefan guy sounds so monotone. I burst out laughing when he was all "I know." "Don't care."
by the way, love her room. like i said before. bahaha
WHY IS HER PHONE RINGTONE CALL ME MAYBE? HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
HAHAHAHA "I got TANGLED!" Man i Still need to watch that...
I like how Charis is loosely based on you. Not getting a boyfriend till college -_- WHen you TOTES COULD
Fave line: "How do you know? I find your strangeness endearing." BAHAHAHAH
Dude this girl totally sounds like you... "What's wrong with meeeeeee? WHy doesn't he wanna be friends with meeeee?" hahahaha 3
And how does this girl forget her own birthday... hhahahaaha what a loser ;)SPEAKING OF ITS ALMOST YOUR BIRTHDAY AHHHHHH
"When did you - how - what - Stefan! THIS LOOKS EXPENSIVE!" AHAHAHAHAHA
I don't even know if this was all suppsoed to make me laugh... maybe I'm weird but I think this is hilarious.
aw yayyyyy:) onto the next chapter
5/17/2012 c1 SwimmingThroughExistance
aww:D really cute. plus, i thought that the end was really nice
aww:D really cute. plus, i thought that the end was really nice
5/16/2012 c2 daresa09
Does every girl go through this at one point ? That's be so shit . I like that she didn't cave and give him a third chance like some people I know . Good story !
Does every girl go through this at one point ? That's be so shit . I like that she didn't cave and give him a third chance like some people I know . Good story !
5/16/2012 c1 daresa09
Aww that was sweet . I totally thought she was going to kiss him when he caught her before she fell .
Aww that was sweet . I totally thought she was going to kiss him when he caught her before she fell .
5/15/2012 c1 Link's Bromance
Hey I'm so lazy to log in!
But that story was really really good! It was so funny sometimes but really truthful. I'm glad they didn't become a cliche couple :P Stefan is so cool in the beginning. I wish, though, you would describe the characters' appearances. Thanks for reviewing my stories, sis.
PS: I think your stories reflect you aLOT. Like aLOT. IDK why there just so much YOU in there. :D In all the sarcasm, the love of books, the funny little interjections, and the lack of confidence in love lol :D
Hey I'm so lazy to log in!
But that story was really really good! It was so funny sometimes but really truthful. I'm glad they didn't become a cliche couple :P Stefan is so cool in the beginning. I wish, though, you would describe the characters' appearances. Thanks for reviewing my stories, sis.
PS: I think your stories reflect you aLOT. Like aLOT. IDK why there just so much YOU in there. :D In all the sarcasm, the love of books, the funny little interjections, and the lack of confidence in love lol :D