for My Confesion to You7/30/2012 c1 
23Love A Mysterious Thing
This is amazing. It was deep.. insansely deep.. and i quite enjoyed it. There was also a lot of emotion in this that pulled on my heart. great write!
23Love A Mysterious ThingThis is amazing. It was deep.. insansely deep.. and i quite enjoyed it. There was also a lot of emotion in this that pulled on my heart. great write!
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
This is beautiful! I'm almost positive I put you on my author alert list and I haven't gotten a single alert! AH! I need to read everything that's new :)
112Stonehartdreamer27This is beautiful! I'm almost positive I put you on my author alert list and I haven't gotten a single alert! AH! I need to read everything that's new :)
7/17/2012 c1 LsyBlurb
You have an amazing way with words.. Each line was filled with so much emotion. Beautiful, simply beautiful
You have an amazing way with words.. Each line was filled with so much emotion. Beautiful, simply beautiful
7/7/2012 c1 50The Moon Howls At The Wolf
Wow, you capture the confusion surrounding love's haze perfectly, and I love how each section could stand on thier own as a love poem, albeit a short one, but together they form this quilt of feeling that mesh together for the big reveal at the end of the "I Love You". Great poem! Keep Writing!
50The Moon Howls At The WolfWow, you capture the confusion surrounding love's haze perfectly, and I love how each section could stand on thier own as a love poem, albeit a short one, but together they form this quilt of feeling that mesh together for the big reveal at the end of the "I Love You". Great poem! Keep Writing!
5/26/2012 c1 15katrrat
wow. You always and I say; ALWAYS, make me shiver. Oh, I can feel the words running through me, I can feel your pain and love. A perfect romantic kind of piece. Keep EVERYTHING UP!
15katrratwow. You always and I say; ALWAYS, make me shiver. Oh, I can feel the words running through me, I can feel your pain and love. A perfect romantic kind of piece. Keep EVERYTHING UP!
5/18/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
Loved this poem. Very heart captivating, and as always love your author's note. It makes my smile brighter. Keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraLoved this poem. Very heart captivating, and as always love your author's note. It makes my smile brighter. Keep it up .
5/18/2012 c1 John 8.36
Gorgeously done. You are quite the romantic! Love, whether reciprocated, lost, or unrequited, makes such a good writing motivation! Keep it up, Shauni!
Gorgeously done. You are quite the romantic! Love, whether reciprocated, lost, or unrequited, makes such a good writing motivation! Keep it up, Shauni!
5/17/2012 c1 80Sami Dial
as always an interesting choice of words. and
also as always i like it :)
expecting more
80Sami Dialas always an interesting choice of words. and
also as always i like it :)
expecting more
5/17/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Your words are always very... poetic. Can't come up with a better word but I guess it works too. :)
Keep up the awesome work.
16Meadow FrostYour words are always very... poetic. Can't come up with a better word but I guess it works too. :)
Keep up the awesome work.