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6/6/2012 c1 15WordsTasteLikeCaramel
I adore how you captured just an instant, a tiny beautiful instant, made even more radiant by your descriptions. I really do love this poem- it reminded me of calmer times, just sitting at my computer and writing away XD (it gets pretty hectic in my house- from dirty dishes to complaining cats, it just doesn't end :D) this poem is lovely and wonderful just the way it is.

:) keep writing
6/4/2012 c1 YuePantera
I liked this. The last line was definitely the best. The imagery is amazing and the size just seems to make it better. :) I especially like the imagery of the rainbow that's created. Your words are picked well and good work on this. X

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