for Ava1/4/2016 c1 
8LorrahBear
I adore the line about not leaving her/his destiny unpolished. What a beautiful image. This flowed really well and was a wonderful read.
8LorrahBearI adore the line about not leaving her/his destiny unpolished. What a beautiful image. This flowed really well and was a wonderful read.
10/10/2012 c1 20Thousand Writer
Mailbox of your soul. I feel like using that in one of my pieces lol. Nice work overall!
I can see this poem going two ways: a woman thinking of God or a woman thinking of her lover.
Sounds like she's longing to be better and hoping he will notice and to eventually reach that ultimate land. I wish Ava the best in reaching that true potential.
20Thousand WriterMailbox of your soul. I feel like using that in one of my pieces lol. Nice work overall!
I can see this poem going two ways: a woman thinking of God or a woman thinking of her lover.
Sounds like she's longing to be better and hoping he will notice and to eventually reach that ultimate land. I wish Ava the best in reaching that true potential.
8/27/2012 c1 12BangxDitto
There are so many lines in here that I love...
I just love the way you use the english language!
It's beauty, pure beauty.
12BangxDittoThere are so many lines in here that I love...
I just love the way you use the english language!
It's beauty, pure beauty.
5/22/2012 c1 Punslinger
Excellent work, as usual. "...before I place this soliloque into the mailbox of your soul..." Breathtaking lines like that make a great poem awesome.
Keep it up!
Excellent work, as usual. "...before I place this soliloque into the mailbox of your soul..." Breathtaking lines like that make a great poem awesome.
Keep it up!
5/22/2012 c1 5Amanda Catarina
Wonderful words! I liked so much. So much...
Especially that: (...) God created scorching days to remind us that we don't want to end up in hell"
Excellent poem! _
Amanda
5Amanda CatarinaWonderful words! I liked so much. So much...
Especially that: (...) God created scorching days to remind us that we don't want to end up in hell"
Excellent poem! _
Amanda
5/22/2012 c1 65Amanda M. Lynn
I love this poem. As usual, you never fail to impress me. The description you gave is great too. I'm actually inspired to explore the topic myself. :-) Keep up the good work!
65Amanda M. LynnI love this poem. As usual, you never fail to impress me. The description you gave is great too. I'm actually inspired to explore the topic myself. :-) Keep up the good work!