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1/4/2016 c1 8LorrahBear
I adore the line about not leaving her/his destiny unpolished. What a beautiful image. This flowed really well and was a wonderful read.
12/20/2012 c1 12agrader
Sometimes I wish these were written about me.
10/10/2012 c1 20Thousand Writer
Mailbox of your soul. I feel like using that in one of my pieces lol. Nice work overall!
I can see this poem going two ways: a woman thinking of God or a woman thinking of her lover.

Sounds like she's longing to be better and hoping he will notice and to eventually reach that ultimate land. I wish Ava the best in reaching that true potential.
8/27/2012 c1 12BangxDitto
There are so many lines in here that I love...
I just love the way you use the english language!
It's beauty, pure beauty.
5/29/2012 c1 167nickyO

This one achieves a touching intimacy. Lovely.
5/22/2012 c1 Punslinger
Excellent work, as usual. "...before I place this soliloque into the mailbox of your soul..." Breathtaking lines like that make a great poem awesome.

Keep it up!
5/22/2012 c1 5Amanda Catarina
Wonderful words! I liked so much. So much...

Especially that: (...) God created scorching days to remind us that we don't want to end up in hell"

Excellent poem! _

5/22/2012 c1 65Amanda M. Lynn
I love this poem. As usual, you never fail to impress me. The description you gave is great too. I'm actually inspired to explore the topic myself. :-) Keep up the good work!

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