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5/31/2012 c3 4Ney13
You really rush into writing, and I had no idea what relationship the main character had with some of the other characters. I don't know why Paige's friends want to leave. Is her town boring, small? It's slightly confusing.
5/31/2012 c3 You Only Live Once
Yay! First review! Anyway, I think your writing shows a lot of promise! Update soon!

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