for Wolfy Instincts1/9/2013 c12 JA
I don't know how many time I've said this or how many more I will but I love your story. Jayda being accepted into Avery's family the way she was made me laugh a bit her basically telling his dad off. Keep writing don't let anything stand in your way. You mentioned losing your insperation I find if you work on something else for a little bitit helps you come back with a clear mind making it easier to write.
XOXO JA XOXO
I don't know how many time I've said this or how many more I will but I love your story. Jayda being accepted into Avery's family the way she was made me laugh a bit her basically telling his dad off. Keep writing don't let anything stand in your way. You mentioned losing your insperation I find if you work on something else for a little bitit helps you come back with a clear mind making it easier to write.
XOXO JA XOXO
1/9/2013 c12 bookworm121197
Love this story! Very detailed and has a great plot line. Took a few days to read due to school work but I'm finally finished. Cannot wait for the next update on Avery and Jay xxc
Love this story! Very detailed and has a great plot line. Took a few days to read due to school work but I'm finally finished. Cannot wait for the next update on Avery and Jay xxc
1/7/2013 c12 elza17
helloooooooo. new reviewer here. :]
this is a great story and i want you to keep up the good work!
i have no complaints at the moment [lol] but to ask, ahem, why the hell did you make jay so short?! its rediculosely hard to imagine her and avery stand side by side, cuz when i do hes like 3ft taller than her!.
one more question, how did you come up with some of the charaters names like lyric,bryliss[is that right?], avery,etc
do they have special meanings of something?
well like i said earlier great story. cant wait for your next update!
Ciao! :)
helloooooooo. new reviewer here. :]
this is a great story and i want you to keep up the good work!
i have no complaints at the moment [lol] but to ask, ahem, why the hell did you make jay so short?! its rediculosely hard to imagine her and avery stand side by side, cuz when i do hes like 3ft taller than her!.
one more question, how did you come up with some of the charaters names like lyric,bryliss[is that right?], avery,etc
do they have special meanings of something?
well like i said earlier great story. cant wait for your next update!
Ciao! :)
1/7/2013 c5 bookworm121197
I just started reading this story and I have to say its truly brilliant and has a captivating plot. My one problem is that when I click on chapter 6 a picture shows and won't let me access your chapter. So here forth, I am stuck on chapter 5 until further notice.
I just started reading this story and I have to say its truly brilliant and has a captivating plot. My one problem is that when I click on chapter 6 a picture shows and won't let me access your chapter. So here forth, I am stuck on chapter 5 until further notice.
1/7/2013 c12 Guest
freaking awesome so many mysteries.. cant wait to see where you go from here
freaking awesome so many mysteries.. cant wait to see where you go from here
1/6/2013 c12 Guest
Wait... Noooooooooooooooooo! It's ended! (I hope not)
Wait... Noooooooooooooooooo! It's ended! (I hope not)
1/6/2013 c7 Guest
Anubis... Like a Boss.
Anubis... Like a Boss.
1/6/2013 c12 simplelove
hope everything went well :) great update, keep up the great writing
hope everything went well :) great update, keep up the great writing
12/28/2012 c12 
4purple-wolf-howl
I hope your family is doing well and that your holiday and new year are happy and healthy. I also hope you are able to update your story- perhaps using a local library with Internet connection? No pressure though! Happy Writting :D
4purple-wolf-howlI hope your family is doing well and that your holiday and new year are happy and healthy. I also hope you are able to update your story- perhaps using a local library with Internet connection? No pressure though! Happy Writting :D
12/26/2012 c12 2Dauntless Insanity
Wow, this is great. I really hope you and your family work everything out. I also hope you can get your chapters up as soon as possible, but I'm not pressuring you :) Just get it done when you can and you can definitely count on my reviews for the next few chapters that you post (:
2Dauntless InsanityWow, this is great. I really hope you and your family work everything out. I also hope you can get your chapters up as soon as possible, but I'm not pressuring you :) Just get it done when you can and you can definitely count on my reviews for the next few chapters that you post (:
12/17/2012 c12 Leigh
One of the few stories on Fiction Press that is well written, and was the only one that I would check daily to see if it had been updated. Please, please,please keep updating.
One of the few stories on Fiction Press that is well written, and was the only one that I would check daily to see if it had been updated. Please, please,please keep updating.