for Wolfy Instincts9/27/2012 c1 
1I caught myself
Hahaha first chapter of this was really good. The first few lines were pretty funny too. I cant wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this, I really mean it. You've got something good here.
1I caught myselfHahaha first chapter of this was really good. The first few lines were pretty funny too. I cant wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this, I really mean it. You've got something good here.
9/11/2012 c2 1Amy90
So her broken wrist magically healed after she ruined it even more by hitting Avery...? ;)
1Amy90So her broken wrist magically healed after she ruined it even more by hitting Avery...? ;)
9/8/2012 c1 6GreysonDrew
Good Chapter. But, not as good as the others. It seemed to lack... pizazz. It was quite... bland. And the last line, was it sarcasm? It didn't seem entirely clear. And also, Avery is very clingy. I know it's merely his instincts, but still. It makes it seem very... un-boy like. He was the bad boy, and all of a sudden, he changes. I don't know why, but I only noticed it now.
As for the name change, I wouldn't change it. I quite like the name. If it was "Primitive Instincts", it can mean lots of things. There are many primitive creatures in the world, and to other people who haven't read your story, it can mean something else. Whereas if you leave it as "Wolfy Instincts", it's quite obvious it deals with wolves. Plus, people who aren't alerted to your story, but still read it, might not be able to find it again after you change the title. Seriously, don't.
6GreysonDrewGood Chapter. But, not as good as the others. It seemed to lack... pizazz. It was quite... bland. And the last line, was it sarcasm? It didn't seem entirely clear. And also, Avery is very clingy. I know it's merely his instincts, but still. It makes it seem very... un-boy like. He was the bad boy, and all of a sudden, he changes. I don't know why, but I only noticed it now.
As for the name change, I wouldn't change it. I quite like the name. If it was "Primitive Instincts", it can mean lots of things. There are many primitive creatures in the world, and to other people who haven't read your story, it can mean something else. Whereas if you leave it as "Wolfy Instincts", it's quite obvious it deals with wolves. Plus, people who aren't alerted to your story, but still read it, might not be able to find it again after you change the title. Seriously, don't.
9/8/2012 c9 16non.graceful
Nice. Avery seems stalkerish... A clingy boyfriend you can't get rid of. A parasite -.- I think you need to bring back some troubles of Jays so that there's more tension. An audience thrives off tension
16non.gracefulNice. Avery seems stalkerish... A clingy boyfriend you can't get rid of. A parasite -.- I think you need to bring back some troubles of Jays so that there's more tension. An audience thrives off tension
9/8/2012 c9 chicagobabe
Hey,
Sorry haven't reviewed in the past few chapters, but i am loving the story!
Every time i get a notification of of ur update, lol i squeal so loud! Makes my day.
Keep up the good work (:
Hey,
Sorry haven't reviewed in the past few chapters, but i am loving the story!
Every time i get a notification of of ur update, lol i squeal so loud! Makes my day.
Keep up the good work (:
9/7/2012 c9 Grape
Oh my! Ha ha! Love the ending of that. Great chapter! So glad to see a review, made my day!
Oh my! Ha ha! Love the ending of that. Great chapter! So glad to see a review, made my day!
9/5/2012 c9 appleworm
I've read my share of werewolf stories, but yours is the only one that has got me hopelessly and completely addicted to it. I love all the characters but I find Jayda's character very refreshing and unique. The plot and the entire story is well written and feels real.
Awesome piece of work...Keep up the good work...
Can't wait for more
I've read my share of werewolf stories, but yours is the only one that has got me hopelessly and completely addicted to it. I love all the characters but I find Jayda's character very refreshing and unique. The plot and the entire story is well written and feels real.
Awesome piece of work...Keep up the good work...
Can't wait for more
9/4/2012 c9 JA
Did not expect that! Mr Stoker is a wolf. This is good now they get to spend heaps more time together. Love your story.
JA
Did not expect that! Mr Stoker is a wolf. This is good now they get to spend heaps more time together. Love your story.
JA
9/4/2012 c9 Guest
awesome chapter i like the way jayday is starting to lean more on avery i mean like litterally maybe her instincts are rising up... lol keep it going
awesome chapter i like the way jayday is starting to lean more on avery i mean like litterally maybe her instincts are rising up... lol keep it going
9/3/2012 c9 ChristianAngel01
ohh whoa he really is going to be everywhere! I love his declaration! it was soo sweet and overwhelming as well! they treat her soo bad man i know how she feel.. at the end i wonder now what people will do and say hehehe
ohh whoa he really is going to be everywhere! I love his declaration! it was soo sweet and overwhelming as well! they treat her soo bad man i know how she feel.. at the end i wonder now what people will do and say hehehe
9/3/2012 c9 1mydreamadventure
hahaha this is cute i liked it! there was some grammatical mistakes but i honestly barely noticed i was so involved in the story haha. its cute but i hate how shes so angry with him all the time and how he gets so so so protective like maybe a little too much, and she like hates him alot at some points, which keeps me intrigued dont get me wrong i just want her and him to be happy together and not fight as much or like figure out her true feelings and admit them to put me at ease haha. i liked the ending though. keep it up :D
1mydreamadventurehahaha this is cute i liked it! there was some grammatical mistakes but i honestly barely noticed i was so involved in the story haha. its cute but i hate how shes so angry with him all the time and how he gets so so so protective like maybe a little too much, and she like hates him alot at some points, which keeps me intrigued dont get me wrong i just want her and him to be happy together and not fight as much or like figure out her true feelings and admit them to put me at ease haha. i liked the ending though. keep it up :D
9/1/2012 c8 Alison
I love it. Don't you dare give up on this one. UPDAAAATE!
I love it. Don't you dare give up on this one. UPDAAAATE!