
8/12/2012 c7 JA
I liked this chapter. I think it was great how you showed that Jay could look after her self. I also love the dog he seams so cute. Keep up the good work.
Xoxo JA Xoxo
I liked this chapter. I think it was great how you showed that Jay could look after her self. I also love the dog he seams so cute. Keep up the good work.
Xoxo JA Xoxo
8/12/2012 c7
4purple-wolf-howl
Hi! Wow to see how this story grew so much in such a little time! I'm been reading this when you put in Avery's POV and to see how it evolved is wonderful! I love this story! Update soon!

Hi! Wow to see how this story grew so much in such a little time! I'm been reading this when you put in Avery's POV and to see how it evolved is wonderful! I love this story! Update soon!
8/12/2012 c7 Larrissa Freeman
I'm a previous reader. I liked this chapter! can't wait to find out how Avery will react to Anubis. Please keep updating!
I'm a previous reader. I liked this chapter! can't wait to find out how Avery will react to Anubis. Please keep updating!
8/12/2012 c7 Guest
nice
nice
8/12/2012 c7 ChristianAngel01
lol man i love this chapter! it was funny! plus i love how the dog came in! but man does the name have to be anubis? u do know that the name is the eygyptian god of the underworld.. i mean that is creepy. but thats what u want! btw my bday is on the 20th *wink wink* hint hint*
lol man i love this chapter! it was funny! plus i love how the dog came in! but man does the name have to be anubis? u do know that the name is the eygyptian god of the underworld.. i mean that is creepy. but thats what u want! btw my bday is on the 20th *wink wink* hint hint*
8/9/2012 c6 Grape
I hope you update this soon! It's such a lovely story!
I hope you update this soon! It's such a lovely story!
8/9/2012 c6 Alison
LOVE THIS! UPDATE EVERYDAY! D
LOVE THIS! UPDATE EVERYDAY! D
8/2/2012 c6 MaidInFrance
hi, im sorry but i've been reading this from the beginning, and just now am giving my first review...I love this story, it is really well written, and flows nicely...I hope Daniel gets his ass kicked by Avery !
hi, im sorry but i've been reading this from the beginning, and just now am giving my first review...I love this story, it is really well written, and flows nicely...I hope Daniel gets his ass kicked by Avery !
7/28/2012 c6 ChristianAngel01
ohh whoa! dis is an awesome chapter! love the end i would love it if avery just walk in and catch him lol cant wait for the next one!
ohh whoa! dis is an awesome chapter! love the end i would love it if avery just walk in and catch him lol cant wait for the next one!
7/27/2012 c6
34Snowlilly31497
Ooooooh! So, now Daniel's going to tell Kortney and she's going to hate Jay even more! Jay and Avery have got to do something about this!

Ooooooh! So, now Daniel's going to tell Kortney and she's going to hate Jay even more! Jay and Avery have got to do something about this!
7/26/2012 c6 JA
So worth the wait. I live in Aslustralia and first thing this morning I checked to see if you had updated. I was so excited when I saw you had, I got half way through reading the chapter and had to leave for school so I wasn't late. When I got home I finished the chapter. I love it I love the whole story. Can't wait till your next chapter. Really want know what Jayda will do about the whole dating someone else when she's his mate thing. I also love how caring you made Avery. He seems like a jerk to everyone else but he's supper sweet to Jayda.
So worth the wait. I live in Aslustralia and first thing this morning I checked to see if you had updated. I was so excited when I saw you had, I got half way through reading the chapter and had to leave for school so I wasn't late. When I got home I finished the chapter. I love it I love the whole story. Can't wait till your next chapter. Really want know what Jayda will do about the whole dating someone else when she's his mate thing. I also love how caring you made Avery. He seems like a jerk to everyone else but he's supper sweet to Jayda.
7/26/2012 c6 Guest
NO! I have wait for three weeks!
NO! I have wait for three weeks!