for Wolfy Instincts6/12/2013 c18 Dee
YAY! I love the way you made this play out. One part of me is saying "AVERYWHYNO" and the other part is just as bloodthirsty as evwas. I'm really glad this is finished, and I can't wait for the epilogue. Eek! Good luck with othe stories! :D
YAY! I love the way you made this play out. One part of me is saying "AVERYWHYNO" and the other part is just as bloodthirsty as evwas. I'm really glad this is finished, and I can't wait for the epilogue. Eek! Good luck with othe stories! :D
6/12/2013 c18 Elmo Fanatic
Did you mean 2 months until next update, or til the sequel?
Either way, I loved this.
Did you mean 2 months until next update, or til the sequel?
Either way, I loved this.
6/12/2013 c16 
3TheClosetWriter16
Oh and I think you should make the title something with 'Wolfy' as well to add something to the next installment from the original :)
3TheClosetWriter16Oh and I think you should make the title something with 'Wolfy' as well to add something to the next installment from the original :)
6/12/2013 c18 TheClosetWriter16
Wow, another amazing chapter! I absolutely loved it :D I feel terrible for Darcy but also for Jay... I don't think she's selfish. Any other normal person would act that way too!
Anyway, I can't wait to read more :)
Wow, another amazing chapter! I absolutely loved it :D I feel terrible for Darcy but also for Jay... I don't think she's selfish. Any other normal person would act that way too!
Anyway, I can't wait to read more :)
6/11/2013 c18 lostlamb
This chapter has left conflicted. Not exactly sure what to say. It was definitely an interesting chapter.
This chapter has left conflicted. Not exactly sure what to say. It was definitely an interesting chapter.
6/11/2013 c18 Lullay
I'm disappointed. Seriously ! After investing so much into this story, I feel like you rushed the ending. I don't really know what's lacking but this happened too fast.
Then again, you mention you're going to write another arc, so I guess I won't know until then U.u I just hope you'll put an update not on this story to remind us.
And also, I have so many questions still unanswered but then again, I guess it will have to wait until the next installment.
As for story ideas, I would very much like for you to keep it related to the "wolfy" adjective. Here, we have Wolfy Instincts, because Avery's instincts as a wolf cause him to recognize Jay as his mate. Now that he has rescued her, I think he will feel the need to be with her and to possess her (in all possible ways :wink: :wink:) I think a title like Wolfy Possession or Wolfy Love (the big word hasn't yet been said on Jay's part) or something like that. Does my idea suck ?...Probably.
Well, that's all for this chapter !
Kisses :D
I'm disappointed. Seriously ! After investing so much into this story, I feel like you rushed the ending. I don't really know what's lacking but this happened too fast.
Then again, you mention you're going to write another arc, so I guess I won't know until then U.u I just hope you'll put an update not on this story to remind us.
And also, I have so many questions still unanswered but then again, I guess it will have to wait until the next installment.
As for story ideas, I would very much like for you to keep it related to the "wolfy" adjective. Here, we have Wolfy Instincts, because Avery's instincts as a wolf cause him to recognize Jay as his mate. Now that he has rescued her, I think he will feel the need to be with her and to possess her (in all possible ways :wink: :wink:) I think a title like Wolfy Possession or Wolfy Love (the big word hasn't yet been said on Jay's part) or something like that. Does my idea suck ?...Probably.
Well, that's all for this chapter !
Kisses :D
6/11/2013 c18 14FallenAngelFromTheSky
Darcy makes me feel so sad...when I am supposed to be happy that Avery rescued Jayda! AHH! So many mixed emotions... maybe my emotions will level out next chapter when she goes home. We'll see...great chapter! Update soon...er! Please! :)
-Fallen
14FallenAngelFromTheSkyDarcy makes me feel so sad...when I am supposed to be happy that Avery rescued Jayda! AHH! So many mixed emotions... maybe my emotions will level out next chapter when she goes home. We'll see...great chapter! Update soon...er! Please! :)
-Fallen
6/10/2013 c18 augmentedDREAMS
They're dead. *sniff* :(
BTW, I too agree that Jay should let Darcy die. No one can live with the guilt. He'd probably end up killing her or himself. .
Anyway, AWESOME CHAPPY! Can't wait for the next one! xDD
They're dead. *sniff* :(
BTW, I too agree that Jay should let Darcy die. No one can live with the guilt. He'd probably end up killing her or himself. .
Anyway, AWESOME CHAPPY! Can't wait for the next one! xDD
6/10/2013 c18 monkeyface1
Whoop! Finally found jay! I do feel bad about Avery killing the others but really happy he didn't kill Darcy. So happy, I can't wait for the final chapter! Tha ma for updating I missed this story a bunch!
Whoop! Finally found jay! I do feel bad about Avery killing the others but really happy he didn't kill Darcy. So happy, I can't wait for the final chapter! Tha ma for updating I missed this story a bunch!
6/10/2013 c18 5Skittlesaholic1677
Oh my god that is so sad. Omfg but its good. I am relieved you updated! YAY!
5Skittlesaholic1677Oh my god that is so sad. Omfg but its good. I am relieved you updated! YAY!
6/10/2013 c18 Guest
Woah everything just went downhill... Why didn't she do anything to save them!? Seriously!?
Woah everything just went downhill... Why didn't she do anything to save them!? Seriously!?
6/10/2013 c18 Hmm
Not a fan of this ending, to be honest. I really liked this story the entire time and was so excited whenever you updated. This ending was bad. Jay was painted as a selfish, immature idiot...not sure why you'd want your narrator to be that way. She didn't do a thing to stop Kenley, Alora, or Salem's deaths and she acted very out of character. The whole ending with Darcy leaves a lot of loose ends and it just seemed so stupid and unrelated to everything else you'd written in the story. And what the fuck, he just tells her he'll never forget this and she watched all that death and then goes I'd never be happier. Anticlimactic and irrelevant. Dissapointed.
Not a fan of this ending, to be honest. I really liked this story the entire time and was so excited whenever you updated. This ending was bad. Jay was painted as a selfish, immature idiot...not sure why you'd want your narrator to be that way. She didn't do a thing to stop Kenley, Alora, or Salem's deaths and she acted very out of character. The whole ending with Darcy leaves a lot of loose ends and it just seemed so stupid and unrelated to everything else you'd written in the story. And what the fuck, he just tells her he'll never forget this and she watched all that death and then goes I'd never be happier. Anticlimactic and irrelevant. Dissapointed.