for Wolfy Instincts5/14/2013 c13 zileisoj12
Like your story . Never know what's going to happen next. The added humor is a big plus.
Like your story . Never know what's going to happen next. The added humor is a big plus.
5/14/2013 c16 ChameleonRose
This chapter is so sad. What's don't get is why they won't let Jay go I thought they only took her because they thought that she was being abused by Avery's pack? Even though what happened in the chapter upset me a little because Jay is being held captive for 6 months. Still so happy you updated. Seriously I don't know how many times I've said this but I love your story.
ChameleonRose
This chapter is so sad. What's don't get is why they won't let Jay go I thought they only took her because they thought that she was being abused by Avery's pack? Even though what happened in the chapter upset me a little because Jay is being held captive for 6 months. Still so happy you updated. Seriously I don't know how many times I've said this but I love your story.
ChameleonRose
5/13/2013 c16 RandomCitizen
I'm sorry Jay, Kenley's right. :P That was probably one of the most least thought out escape attempts I have ever read. Xp
She was very sick with no direction in snowy winter.(dont escape if you need pain killers!)
A dude huh? This is one of those unreliable protagonist things?
I occasionally wonder how the story would have been turning out if his sister wasnt there when her recently discovered mate assulted her. o.o That would be a significant plot change for all of it. A whole 'nother story.
I'm sorry Jay, Kenley's right. :P That was probably one of the most least thought out escape attempts I have ever read. Xp
She was very sick with no direction in snowy winter.(dont escape if you need pain killers!)
A dude huh? This is one of those unreliable protagonist things?
I occasionally wonder how the story would have been turning out if his sister wasnt there when her recently discovered mate assulted her. o.o That would be a significant plot change for all of it. A whole 'nother story.
5/13/2013 c16 ruth
Calm down, I didn't review this time because I was satisfied... You aren't the only one with a butt load of homework you know! Keep up the good work and I suppose I shall have to keep reading... Who am I kidding, I love this dont let it end!
Calm down, I didn't review this time because I was satisfied... You aren't the only one with a butt load of homework you know! Keep up the good work and I suppose I shall have to keep reading... Who am I kidding, I love this dont let it end!
5/13/2013 c16 
1CRSmith
That's right suckaz. Goin' for the gold! And I have no idea what I am saying. And I still feel the need to punch Kenley. Repeatedly. With steel. And then be mauled by tiger. Repeatedly.
1CRSmithThat's right suckaz. Goin' for the gold! And I have no idea what I am saying. And I still feel the need to punch Kenley. Repeatedly. With steel. And then be mauled by tiger. Repeatedly.
5/13/2013 c16 monkeyface1
Omg,! I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story a lot! Gosh jayda was so close! I feel so bad for her dad though. :( I hope Avery finds her soon.
Omg,! I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story a lot! Gosh jayda was so close! I feel so bad for her dad though. :( I hope Avery finds her soon.
5/13/2013 c16 4purple-wolf-howl
Omg! Six months! I hope Avery's lead is solid, the poor boy! Poor Jeda, can't seem to catch a break. Great story and I hope this ends with a bang! Happy writing!
4purple-wolf-howlOmg! Six months! I hope Avery's lead is solid, the poor boy! Poor Jeda, can't seem to catch a break. Great story and I hope this ends with a bang! Happy writing!
5/13/2013 c14 cathlene
For chapter 16- I noticed you didn't mention jays mom surely she is worried and was maybe about too?
For chapter 16- I noticed you didn't mention jays mom surely she is worried and was maybe about too?
5/13/2013 c16 cathlene
So so happy happy happy that you posted a chapter! Loved it! Loved how Darcy was thought to be a girl! Just so excited to read more! I was wondering if you were going to drag out her kiddnapping. I like how your doing it so far and am just as excited to read more so keep up the good work!
So so happy happy happy that you posted a chapter! Loved it! Loved how Darcy was thought to be a girl! Just so excited to read more! I was wondering if you were going to drag out her kiddnapping. I like how your doing it so far and am just as excited to read more so keep up the good work!
5/13/2013 c16 The Girl Who Dreamed Of Faerie
I sat staring at the screen refusing to believe this chapter was over till reality hit :(
I sat staring at the screen refusing to believe this chapter was over till reality hit :(
5/11/2013 c3 Guest
hey!
OMG I actual love your story so much once I started I could not stop reading! Best Story I have read on Fiction Press so far! hahaah
The characters a great! love the relationship between Avery and Jay. I really want her to tell him about all her family issues. will be a good chapter! Anyways I know your must be sure busy but please update this as soon as possible because I want to keep reading! :)
hey!
OMG I actual love your story so much once I started I could not stop reading! Best Story I have read on Fiction Press so far! hahaah
The characters a great! love the relationship between Avery and Jay. I really want her to tell him about all her family issues. will be a good chapter! Anyways I know your must be sure busy but please update this as soon as possible because I want to keep reading! :)
5/1/2013 c15 ruth
I suppose this is a sufficient installment... just keep them coming and no one gets hurt :)
I suppose this is a sufficient installment... just keep them coming and no one gets hurt :)
4/26/2013 c15 The Girl Who Dreamed Of Faerie
I completely love this story! I really hope you get around to updating soon!
I completely love this story! I really hope you get around to updating soon!