
3/27/2013 c15 Lullay
At long last ! An update ! I was seriously strating to lose any hope !
I've been following 3 stories, including yours, and you're (probably) the only one I'll still hear of U.u
That aside, I loved this chapter ! They're so totally screwed ! Avery's going to give them hell for taking darling Jay away !
I look forward to reading Avery's POV on this long long long long time apart. Must be tearing him U.u
And don't worry for the long wait, after all "Distance makes the heart grow fonder" and school should akways be the top priority :)
I hope you'll update soon but don't feel ( much too ?) pressured by that :)
Toodles !
At long last ! An update ! I was seriously strating to lose any hope !
I've been following 3 stories, including yours, and you're (probably) the only one I'll still hear of U.u
That aside, I loved this chapter ! They're so totally screwed ! Avery's going to give them hell for taking darling Jay away !
I look forward to reading Avery's POV on this long long long long time apart. Must be tearing him U.u
And don't worry for the long wait, after all "Distance makes the heart grow fonder" and school should akways be the top priority :)
I hope you'll update soon but don't feel ( much too ?) pressured by that :)
Toodles !
3/26/2013 c15 chicagobabe
Awh, thank you for this update! I always get excited to read a new chapter. I love this chapter, I like where it's heading and cannot wait to read more :D
Awh, thank you for this update! I always get excited to read a new chapter. I love this chapter, I like where it's heading and cannot wait to read more :D
3/26/2013 c15
1DeadlyKitten2021
I feel like shooting by you with a slice of orange... anyways i really want to read more so errrmmm... UPDATE please ;P lolz thank you

I feel like shooting by you with a slice of orange... anyways i really want to read more so errrmmm... UPDATE please ;P lolz thank you
3/26/2013 c15 Jynx4Ever
I love this fic. Really. You should update more. I checked this story almost every other day to see if you had updated or not. Please don't keep me waiting too long...
I love this fic. Really. You should update more. I checked this story almost every other day to see if you had updated or not. Please don't keep me waiting too long...
3/26/2013 c15 simplelove
Amazing! nice so far - a bit confused on who everyone is esp Kenley but I am assuming that was done on purpose to create anticipation and a sort-of cliff hanger. Keep up the great writing :)
Amazing! nice so far - a bit confused on who everyone is esp Kenley but I am assuming that was done on purpose to create anticipation and a sort-of cliff hanger. Keep up the great writing :)
3/26/2013 c15
4purple-wolf-howl
Oh what a twist! Does this mean Kenley will try to make Jay his mate? Will Avery find her in time before Jay falls for Kenley or will this make Jay and Avery's relationship stronger? Will she fall for Kenley?! Please update soon! This story is awesome!

Oh what a twist! Does this mean Kenley will try to make Jay his mate? Will Avery find her in time before Jay falls for Kenley or will this make Jay and Avery's relationship stronger? Will she fall for Kenley?! Please update soon! This story is awesome!
3/26/2013 c15 Nnnnnnn
Oh! Ur not dead! Lol...my friend was getting worried but I told her u were busy bcuz u go to school. Now, to the chapter! I really likes this chapter. I was bitconfused wen Darcy turned red wen She was changing. Oh MD I'm starting to wonder if Kenley likes her more than friends MD man! I'm excited. Where's Avery! How's he taking it? Holy shit! Cnt wait
Oh! Ur not dead! Lol...my friend was getting worried but I told her u were busy bcuz u go to school. Now, to the chapter! I really likes this chapter. I was bitconfused wen Darcy turned red wen She was changing. Oh MD I'm starting to wonder if Kenley likes her more than friends MD man! I'm excited. Where's Avery! How's he taking it? Holy shit! Cnt wait
3/26/2013 c15
19bookppl93
Oh geez. I want Kenley to let her go home ;-; I mean. AVE-AVERYYY'S GOING TO STRUGLLE! :c

Oh geez. I want Kenley to let her go home ;-; I mean. AVE-AVERYYY'S GOING TO STRUGLLE! :c
3/25/2013 c15 ChameleonRose
Poor Jay. She jus wants to go home. Avery is going pop a vain. Why do I have a feeling a war of sorts is going to break out. Also back to the thing with Avery being the same as the alpha does that have anything to do with the fact that Avery has Jayda as a mate. Like the Alpha has a human mate as well.
Poor Jay. She jus wants to go home. Avery is going pop a vain. Why do I have a feeling a war of sorts is going to break out. Also back to the thing with Avery being the same as the alpha does that have anything to do with the fact that Avery has Jayda as a mate. Like the Alpha has a human mate as well.
3/25/2013 c15 cathlene
So excited that you posted a chapter even happier with how long it was. Did not see that comming with all those people and can't wait to see (read) what happens next! Keep up the great work and take your time makes the chapters better that way. If you rush them you might regret some choices so yeah take your time always more exciting that way!
So excited that you posted a chapter even happier with how long it was. Did not see that comming with all those people and can't wait to see (read) what happens next! Keep up the great work and take your time makes the chapters better that way. If you rush them you might regret some choices so yeah take your time always more exciting that way!
3/24/2013 c14
1DeadlyKitten2021
Ill kill yoo..oh a donut anywho ... poor Avery i love him so much i just wanna hug him :P p.s. i want more please :)

Ill kill yoo..oh a donut anywho ... poor Avery i love him so much i just wanna hug him :P p.s. i want more please :)
3/22/2013 c14 Guest
Please do not stop more chapters please :)
Please do not stop more chapters please :)