for Wolfy Instincts3/10/2013 c6 RandomCitizen
Pft. He's such a clingy wolf.
That brother is. . . Helpful to his bully of a sister I guess? :P
Pft. He's such a clingy wolf.
That brother is. . . Helpful to his bully of a sister I guess? :P
3/10/2013 c4 RandomCitizen
I like how theis insn't one of those "the pack is on his side so accept our ways" situation. Ya know? Where the girl has to leave her life story completely for supernatural. Avery is gonna get his arse kicked. Cause those mating methods were so resonable and shouldve be followed. :D I'm gonna enjoy this. *grins malevelntly*
I like how theis insn't one of those "the pack is on his side so accept our ways" situation. Ya know? Where the girl has to leave her life story completely for supernatural. Avery is gonna get his arse kicked. Cause those mating methods were so resonable and shouldve be followed. :D I'm gonna enjoy this. *grins malevelntly*
3/10/2013 c1 RandomCitizen
She is like a little Rukia! (well not a LITTLE RUKIA, that'd be too small XP)
His pack were giving him greetings. . . 'XP
Well he let that out a bit bluntly, held out londer than I thought he would though. :P
She is like a little Rukia! (well not a LITTLE RUKIA, that'd be too small XP)
His pack were giving him greetings. . . 'XP
Well he let that out a bit bluntly, held out londer than I thought he would though. :P
3/8/2013 c14 
2edustar06
My heart was beating fast when i was reading this. I can't wait to see how Avery is going to save Jay! LOVE IT!
2edustar06My heart was beating fast when i was reading this. I can't wait to see how Avery is going to save Jay! LOVE IT!
3/8/2013 c13 edustar06
I Love this story! i really didn't expect Jay to be kidnapped. can't wait for chapter 14!
I Love this story! i really didn't expect Jay to be kidnapped. can't wait for chapter 14!
3/5/2013 c3 edustar06
This is great story I love it, but it would have been better if we can see what was going on Avery's mind when Jay was pushing him away. did he understand what she's coming from or did he feel rejected because he was afraid that she wan't love him back. but over all it's great!
This is great story I love it, but it would have been better if we can see what was going on Avery's mind when Jay was pushing him away. did he understand what she's coming from or did he feel rejected because he was afraid that she wan't love him back. but over all it's great!
2/26/2013 c14 ruth
HEY YOU WITH THE FACE! YOU NEED TO KEEP UPDATING THIS! SCREW SO EXAMS! JUST MAKE SURE YOU DO WELL ON YOUR SATS AND COLLEGES WILL LOOOOOOVE YOU! PLEEEEEEEASE I AM BEGGING YOU! KEEP WRITING! DON'T STOP! HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUJUUUUUUUUUR RRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY! I. Am. Dying.
HEY YOU WITH THE FACE! YOU NEED TO KEEP UPDATING THIS! SCREW SO EXAMS! JUST MAKE SURE YOU DO WELL ON YOUR SATS AND COLLEGES WILL LOOOOOOVE YOU! PLEEEEEEEASE I AM BEGGING YOU! KEEP WRITING! DON'T STOP! HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUJUUUUUUUUUR RRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY! I. Am. Dying.
2/26/2013 c14 mylittleprincess
awesome! update moor:)
awesome! update moor:)
2/25/2013 c14 Guest
No, It can't stop here!
No, It can't stop here!