for The Dream Maker2/23/2013 c24 
6Carmel March
Oh my goodness, I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. Amazing amazing amazing.
6Carmel MarchOh my goodness, I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. Amazing amazing amazing.
2/2/2013 c23 Carmel March
Amazing chapter. It was really well done on an emotional level, loved how realistic that all was.
And the ending...well, I was speechless for a bit there. Please, please update soon. That is possibly the most brutal cliffhanger I've ever read!
But I still love this story :)
Amazing chapter. It was really well done on an emotional level, loved how realistic that all was.
And the ending...well, I was speechless for a bit there. Please, please update soon. That is possibly the most brutal cliffhanger I've ever read!
But I still love this story :)
1/24/2013 c22 Carmel March
I've missed this story so much! Great chapter, as usual. A bit of a cliffhanger at the end, though, so I hope you update soon!
I've missed this story so much! Great chapter, as usual. A bit of a cliffhanger at the end, though, so I hope you update soon!
12/20/2012 c21 Carmel March
That was such a sweet ending to the chapter. Excellent job, I really loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next!
That was such a sweet ending to the chapter. Excellent job, I really loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next!
11/21/2012 c17 Carmel March
Amazing, like super amazing. You set the tone perfectly in each scene. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Amazing, like super amazing. You set the tone perfectly in each scene. I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/9/2012 c16 Carmel March
Ooh, such tenseness. I love the direction you're taking this story in. I grin every time I see an update in my inbox!
Ooh, such tenseness. I love the direction you're taking this story in. I grin every time I see an update in my inbox!
10/21/2012 c15 Carmel March
Ah! I can't even tell you how much I love this story! Keep up the brilliant work :)
Ah! I can't even tell you how much I love this story! Keep up the brilliant work :)
10/16/2012 c14 Carmel March
I'm so sorry about the late review! I've been swamped with midterms, but reading this chapter was a welcome relief from studying! I loved, loved, loved it! I can't wait for the next one.
I'm so sorry about the late review! I've been swamped with midterms, but reading this chapter was a welcome relief from studying! I loved, loved, loved it! I can't wait for the next one.
10/1/2012 c13 Carmel March
Great chapter! I like the direction you're taking this. I'm looking forward to the next installment!
PS
Thank you so much for your review of Vertigo, by the way! I really, really appreciate it :)
Great chapter! I like the direction you're taking this. I'm looking forward to the next installment!
PS
Thank you so much for your review of Vertigo, by the way! I really, really appreciate it :)
9/28/2012 c12 Carmel March
I love this story. The storyline is intriguing and creative, and I just adore the characters you've created! Can't wait for more!
I love this story. The storyline is intriguing and creative, and I just adore the characters you've created! Can't wait for more!
7/3/2012 c1 3dream-beautiful
Wow, interesting start. This was really descriptive and well-written. It's kind of rare you find recent stories on this site (and by that I mean not ones from years ago that are already completed, where your reviews don't really mean much) that is so fluidly written. Good job, looking forward to the next chapters when I have time to read them! :)
3dream-beautifulWow, interesting start. This was really descriptive and well-written. It's kind of rare you find recent stories on this site (and by that I mean not ones from years ago that are already completed, where your reviews don't really mean much) that is so fluidly written. Good job, looking forward to the next chapters when I have time to read them! :)
5/31/2012 c1 dream4rent
Oh wow! I really enjoyed reading this. It is complex and interesting an one must really focus, but it makes the story so much more fun. The concept is very unique and you certainly have a way of painting a picture with words. Please post again, soon...:)
Oh wow! I really enjoyed reading this. It is complex and interesting an one must really focus, but it makes the story so much more fun. The concept is very unique and you certainly have a way of painting a picture with words. Please post again, soon...:)
5/30/2012 c1 Cara Coleman
very good. detailed and realistic with good imagery.
overall a great piece! can't wait to read more :)
very good. detailed and realistic with good imagery.
overall a great piece! can't wait to read more :)